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It's been a long while since I've updated FoE: Fillies. Too long. And I feel a bit of an explanation is in order.

I've been writing and re-writing chapter two, but every time I do it just hasn't been working. At all. And I didn't understand why. Finally I figured it out, and by that I mean one of my pre-readers bopped my on the head and pointed it out: chapter two wasn't working because chapter one wasn't leading up to it properly.

So I've edited chapter one. I'm gonna ask that pre-reader to look it over and give his opinion, but in the meantime I'll finish up my current draft of chapter two and, hopefully, have it out to the prereaders within a week.

Sorry for the unreasonably long delay. Updates are forthcoming.

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#83367 · 46w, 5d ago · · ·
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>>83347

I require updates to be emailed for my convenience. :scootangel:

#83347 · 46w, 5d ago · · ·
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Thank you for the Fave of Fever Dreams! I appreciate it!:twilightsmile:

#66441 · 49w, 4d ago · · ·
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>>66272

So, it has come to this.

#66272 · 49w, 4d ago · · ·
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We are watching you!

#57890 · 51w, 2d ago · · ·
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>>57888

:twilightoops:

*hides*

Don't look at me! Look at my pony words. Over there.

*points*

#57888 · 51w, 2d ago · · ·
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'Bought that time again :coolphoto:

*watches*

#27954 · 56w, 6d ago · · ·
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Thanks for the favorite on Post Nuptials!

#22193 · 58w, 1d ago · · ·
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>>22192

I like fantastic and well-written stories. Also, you explored an area of Tiny Wings that was very interesting to look into.

Also also, you murdered Thunder Clap. You horrible, horrible person. :fluttercry:

#22192 · 58w, 1d ago · · ·
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Thank you so much for the Follow/Watch and the Fave of Shine!:twilightsmile:

#19605 · 58w, 6d ago · · ·
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>>19549

You've got a very interesting concept going with that story. The Elements of Harmony have always been nothing more than a plot device, it is intriguing to explore their origins.

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