I'm BACK! Rewrite? · 8:57pm
Okay guys and gals, my funk is gone and my fingers are a twitching! Let's Write!
But heres the thing, I want to re-write Out of the old.. I think that i've kinda written myself into a corner here with the plotholes, so I'm thinking of just doing a do-over. Starting from chapter one, and going through chapter by chapter, ret-conning the stuff that doesn't make sense, and generally cleaning up the story.
Thoughts?
ANy suggestions about what to change would be welcome (The plot as a whole will stay the same, but quite a lot of details and structure will be altered.
Also thinking of trying another story, non HiE this time, about the diamond dogs.







>>303221
If you have time and are willing, would it be too much to ask of you to give my story a read, even for just a chapter or 2? I'd like some insight from someone able to make such an awesome story.
It's a crossover, but focuses a lot more on MLP. I didn't feel confident about my own several story origins that I had to pluck one out from something else.
>>303143 thanks. I'm trying to get some writing done
Just started reading 'Out of the Old, Into the New,' and I really admire the way you handled Luna and Celestia's dialogue. It gets me real excited to read the next chapter

Aaaaaand now I feel like a derp
thought my story had published, it had not
Update?
Thanks y'all
I was sitting on the idea for about 3 months before I could work up the cajoles to write the thing XD
>>90469
Ditto!
Loving this first story - brilliant.