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I'm BACK! Rewrite? · 8:57pm

Okay guys and gals, my funk is gone and my fingers are a twitching! Let's Write!

But heres the thing, I want to re-write Out of the old.. I think that i've kinda written myself into  a corner here with the plotholes, so I'm thinking of just doing a do-over. Starting from chapter one, and going through chapter by chapter, ret-conning the stuff that doesn't make sense, and generally cleaning up the story.

Thoughts?

ANy suggestions about what to change would be welcome (The plot as a whole will stay the same, but quite a lot of details and structure will be altered.

Also thinking of trying another story, non HiE this time, about the diamond dogs.

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Life through Love

One conversation can change anything. Your life, your world, your species

It was the beginning of season two when he changed me into what I am now.

Into an emotion eating monster with holes in my hooves and fangs in my mouth.

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It's a little cliche yes, but this is something to write while my life gets sorted out

Will get darker and slightly gorey a few dozen chapters from now so I addeed the tags just in case, might change them later

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Out of the Old, Into the New

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#303316 · 15w, 4d ago · · ·
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>>303221

If you have time and are willing, would it be too much to ask of you to give my story a read, even for just a chapter or 2? I'd like some insight from someone able to make such an awesome story.

It's a crossover, but focuses a lot more on MLP. I didn't feel confident about my own several story origins that I had to pluck one out from something else.

#303221 · 15w, 4d ago · · ·
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>>303143 thanks. I'm trying to get some writing done :twilightblush:

#303143 · 15w, 5d ago · · ·
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Just started reading 'Out of the Old, Into the New,' and I really admire the way you handled Luna and Celestia's dialogue. It gets me real excited to read the next chapter :moustache::pinkiehappy:

#241262 · 21w, 4d ago · · ·
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Aaaaaand now I feel like a derp :derpytongue2:

thought my story had published, it had not :facehoof:

#231098 · 22w, 3d ago · · ·
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Update?

#91278 · 41w, 2d ago · · ·
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Thanks y'all :moustache:

I was sitting on the idea for about 3 months before I could work up the cajoles to write the thing XD

#90559 · 41w, 3d ago · · ·
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>>90469

Ditto!

#90469 · 41w, 3d ago · · ·
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Loving this first story - brilliant. :pinkiehappy:

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