Revising Apprentice · 3:27pm
About a month ago, I submitted Apprentice to EqD for consideration. Naturally, I was turned down, else the story would be a lot more popular than it actually is. Or at least have more likes/dislikes. Anyway, the point is, I've decided to re-revise the first chapter.
Those of you who've been with me since I started this little thing of mine would recall that my original draft for Chapter 1 was... rough. Very rough. About five chapters in, I redid it and made it more coherent. It's still pretty rough, but I did it, and aside from all of my minor changes, it's still remained largely the same.
This time, however, taking advice from one of the EqD prereaders, I have a pretty decent list of corrections to make. It can't be minor, because a lot of it is deeply ingrained in the story, so I'm going to periodically revise chapters in order, when I have the time. I definitely want to revise through Chapter 12 if I can, maybe even beyond. I'll have to toss this onto the pile of things I'm doing alongside Worlds and Starbound, though, and that's not even getting onto the topic of school and my lack of a job. But with any luck, this won't be nearly as hard or time-consuming since everything's already done and it's just being rewritten and told a different way.
The first chapter will be deleted and replaced with its contents, so that will be showing up when it gets done.
Now you guys know, so be on the lookout for that!
Rytex out. Have a good day!