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  • T The Nutcracker Prince

    Twilight dreams about a magical nutcracker doll come to life, and must try to help him escape an ancient curse that he has been subject to for several hundred years. But there's far more to it than simply breaking a curse...  · Rytex
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  • T Starbound

    Princess Twilight is the first pony to explore unknown space. Things go bad during the initial flight, and she ends up floating over an unknown planet in unknown space. Now she has to survive long enough to find her way home.  · Rytex
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  • T Even In Other Worlds

    Nathan Samuel is a normal student, living a normal life. After some sickness, he remembers that he's from Equestria, and that everypony is trapped in this other world. Now it's up to him to restore the Elements of Harmony once again in or  · Rytex
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  • T The Legacy of Twilight

    Arcturus Sparkle, Twilight Sparkle's son, sets out to find his mother after receiving a mysterious blank message from his mom's old friend Trixie. His search takes him somewhere he never expected to go: inside his mom's own invention.  · Rytex
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  • T The Apprentice, the Student, and the Charlatan

    Twilight Sparkle meets a pony by the name of Nova Shine who occupies a position as Princess Luna's Night Apprentice. While fighting a shadowy enemy that wants them both dead, they also have to deal with something much worse than that: each oth  · Rytex
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Jan
26th
2015

About a month ago, I submitted Apprentice to EqD for consideration.  Naturally, I was turned down, else the story would be a lot more popular than it actually is.  Or at least have more likes/dislikes.  Anyway, the point is, I've decided to re-revise the first chapter.

Those of you who've been with me since I started this little thing of mine would recall that my original draft for Chapter 1 was... rough.  Very rough.  About five chapters in, I redid it and made it more coherent.  It's still pretty rough, but I did it, and aside from all of my minor changes, it's still remained largely the same.

This time, however, taking advice from one of the EqD prereaders, I have a pretty decent list of corrections to make.  It can't be minor, because a lot of it is deeply ingrained in the story, so I'm going to periodically revise chapters in order, when I have the time.  I definitely want to revise through Chapter 12 if I can, maybe even beyond.  I'll have to toss this onto the pile of things I'm doing alongside Worlds and Starbound, though, and that's not even getting onto the topic of school and my lack of a job.  But with any luck, this won't be nearly as hard or time-consuming since everything's already done and it's just being rewritten and told a different way.

The first chapter will be deleted and replaced with its contents, so that will be showing up when it gets done.

Now you guys know, so be on the lookout for that!

Rytex out.  Have a good day!

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#12 · 2w, 1d ago · · ·

Thank you for the fav on Friendship is Grievous! :twilightsmile: I'd appreciate it if you'd leave me some feedback in the comments!

#11 · 16w, 2d ago · · ·

I finished reading TATSATC and it totally blew my socks off!  Keep up the good work!

#10 · 21w, 3d ago · · ·

Thanks for the fave of Poolside Fun:pinkiehappy:

#9 · 50w, 4h ago · · ·

Sweet! New stories. Always a pleasure.

#8 · 55w, 4d ago · · ·

Thanks for the fave on To Be Pounded!

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