Dec
23rd
2017
Chapter 3 Update · 10:59am Dec 23rd, 2017
So there were a few complaints about how I didn’t give enough context in chapter 3. I will admit I was just trying to get the chapter out and was still on the high of writing the fight scene.
So, I’ve re-written the ending for chapter 3, adding more context for why the Yvalt Empire’s at war, at least from their perspective. I’ve also increased the amount of time the war’s been going to give me a little more room for certain things to seem plausible in later chapters.
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