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MikeKolarov
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Registered: 21st Mar 2012
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Hi everyone,

I've been thinking hard about my story, and the next chapter I wanted to add. I've come to the conclusion I could have done everything a bit better. What I'm not very happy about is the pacing of my story, I feel I need to slow it down in some places and speed it up in others.

I'm going to give it a big revision this week. In my next chapter I'll be introducing my next major OC, and characterizing one of my supporting OCs a bit more, and I want to get it all right. I'm happy with Windshear's characterization but I felt I let him down a little here and there, so I'm going to polish up his appearances a bit more as well.

I won't be taking the story down until the new revision is all ready to go. So enjoy it in this form if you enjoyed it, and perhaps give it another chance once I've revised it all.

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My Little Pony: Winds of Change

Windshear is a retired Royal Guard who's lost sight of what he wanted in life. One day his life is turned upside down after being drafted into the service of Princess Luna who orders him to travel to a distant land and recover a stolen book filled with potentially dangerous magical knowledge not meant for the wrong hooves.

Windshear travels with his closest friend Octavia who serves as his moral compass, and eagerly seeks musical inspiration from different cultures. Also his unlikely ally Trixie who's quick to jump at any opportunity to find power, fame, and fortune. Along the way they will make new friends, and dangerous enemies.

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#319891 · 14w, 3d ago · · ·
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Hello sir or madame,

I am Obsidian Raindrop the creator of a group known as The Great and Not Obsessive Trixie   I am here to ask if you would like your story to be added to my group.

The only requirements are:

1. You have a story about Trixie and she is not completely obsessing over her lose at the hands of Twilight. (She can hate that she lost to twilight and even try and beat again but she just can't be be so obsessive like she is in most stories. )

2.  She may be a supporting character or a main character it does not matter.

3. i can`t think of a third thing

It's me Osidian again asking you guys to do stuff you don't want to.

1. tell me the name of your story and the one folder you want it in

2. join the group it is really cool and we'll soon get a banner up

3. fallow because it will boost my confidence

Sorry to all those who either received this email twice or who don`t have trixie as a main or supporting character. Also just PM me if you want your story added.

Yours truly, Obsidian Raindrop

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