Winds of Change, is changing. · 2:49pm
I've been thinking hard about my story, and the next chapter I wanted to add. I've come to the conclusion I could have done everything a bit better. What I'm not very happy about is the pacing of my story, I feel I need to slow it down in some places and speed it up in others.
I'm going to give it a big revision this week. In my next chapter I'll be introducing my next major OC, and characterizing one of my supporting OCs a bit more, and I want to get it all right. I'm happy with Windshear's characterization but I felt I let him down a little here and there, so I'm going to polish up his appearances a bit more as well.
I won't be taking the story down until the new revision is all ready to go. So enjoy it in this form if you enjoyed it, and perhaps give it another chance once I've revised it all.