Second story prolouge · 8:11pm
I'm almost done writing it. Sorry for keeping you guys waiting.
I'm almost done writing it. Sorry for keeping you guys waiting.
The Griffin Kingdom prepares an invasion on Equestria, and when the Wonderbolts are incapacitated by two griffin aces, a group of pegasus ponies, assembled by Firefly, becomes the land's main aerial defense force, supporting each other in the hardest of times. It's a story of revenge, friendship, sadness, struggles and sacrifices, a war which will change the lives of many a pony and griffon...
Status: COMPLETE.
All that remains are corrections of a few grammar mistakes and walls of text, for which I apologize ^ ^"
This is the first story of the mini-series "Ace Combat: Equestria Chronicles". The story takes place some time after the second season of the show.
It is not a direct adaptation of any Ace Combat game, but it contains many references to the series, as well as to MLP: FiM itself.
Links to GDocs versions can be found here:
http://www.equestriaforums.com/index.php/topic,1874.0.html
The "sad" parts occur every now and then, especially after chapter 9.
All chapters in this fic, except for chapter 15, contain links leading to themes from Ace Combat series. It's used to create an atmosphere. Use "Open in new tab" to listen to these themes. Expect ponified AC characters to appear ;)
A sequel will appear in the future :)
>>429388 You know, Cosmic Mind is thinking of putting Vinyl Scratch in Alto's Valkyrie, even though she should be put it Basara's Valkyrie.
However, due to demands that our favorite DJ be made the leader of the new Fire Bomber, a poll is being held.
What you need to do to vote is send Cosmic Mind a PM saying which Valkyrie you want DJ PON-3 to pilot. If enough people say they want her in Basara's Valkyrie, that is going to be what she pilots.
But you need to hurry, because the poll closes on Thursday!
>>429388 I started a poll in the comments section of Super Pony Wars Sigma about what unit Vinyl Scratch should pilot, and we need you to place a vote by giving a thumbs up to the choice you want.
The question is, should Vinyl Scratch follow in the footsteps of Nekki Basara? Or should a different character be the lead for the new Fire Bomber?
>>429388 In that case, you should check out Super Pony Wars Sigma! Also, are you a fan of Tokusatsu?
>>429001
Yes. Valsion is my favorite mech of the Original Generation, with Cybuster being a close second.
Tell me, was the second part of your name inspired by a certain Super Robot?
>>365629
I'd be happy to review your work for any grammatical errors! I'll be with you ASAP!
>>364495
Not a problem. In fact, I will appreciate your support too.
If you happen to have time, please check my story and send a Private Message with any grammar mistakes you'll find.
I already learned not to put commas after the quotation mark, so I'll fix that issue myself.
But since English is not my first language, there might be some mistakes left from chapter 8 onward (chapter 1-7 were already checked by Silverstein).
Thanks in advance,
Valsion.
Hey, thanks so much for the watch! I really appreciate the support!
"the grey mare"
When I was prereading your story, I found this.
Why is this important?
Read this...and you'll understand.
Silver out!
>>236962 Ah, I see. Well, thanks for visiting me :)