A new pony in Ponyville has everyone confused as to where he came from, he's a weird one all right, he frustrates the HAY out of Twilight Sparkle. He even makes Pinkie Pie seem sane half the time. But that's fine with him, optimism keeps his spirits up, even if his past isn't the best there's ever been. In fact his past is probably among the worst, but it doesn't keep him down.
This is my first take on Comedy, I've never done a story like this before because it's not my favorite style, but it's still fun to write. It's also the first time that I put an OC in a story, the pony has a lot of characteristics that I do, but is different also. Tell me what you think of this story because this isn't my normal type. Also this KIND OF sounds like it could be a troll fic someone told me, that isn't the case however, it's just how I do my comedy.
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