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My favorite stories which you should definitely check out

[Sad] [Random] [Slice of Life] [Alternate Universe]
Being a statue can drive you mad, yes?
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[Adventure] [Slice of Life] [Human]
A mission to inviestigate a far off world takes an interesting twist.
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[Comedy] [Slice of Life]
Young romance unfolds in this shipping story between Scootaloo and Rumble
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[Romance] [Tragedy] [Adventure] [Human]
/2nd Installment of the 7th Element series/ Dan returns to Equestria after 15 years on Earth.
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[Comedy]
Twilight and friends learn what happens after you have too much fun drinking.
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A small amount of information about me

lecriticalwriter
User ID: 11,670
Registered: 2nd Feb 2012
Last Seen: 1d, 13h ago
Story views: 9,942

Congratulations, you could be bothered to click on my name :D anyway, my username used to be Le Critical Writer, but now it's Ph4ntom S33ker, just in case you're confuzzled.

Something you should know when thinking whether you should follow me: my blog posts are nearly always informative, saying when I'm having a break etc. if it directly involves a story, though, I'll link it.

Well, that's about it. Oh yeah, I'm English so I say Aluminium and Colour. Suck it Chrome, that's spelt right. So is spelt.

The line below is true.

The line above is false.

Comments you may wish to leave me :3

#476225 · 1w, 5d ago · · ·
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Why is In our world tagged complete, if you plan to continue the story? Or is that the end of that thing and you're writing a sequel?

#439724 · 4w, 4d ago · · ·
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I saw your avatar, and thought about that movie.

That review he says at the end is the most amazing speech I've ever seen in an animated movie...

#417749 · 6w, 1d ago · · ·
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Thanks for the fav

#407838 · 6w, 6d ago · 4 · ·
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Just finished In Our World. Loved every bit of it. :rainbowkiss: I don't know if you have any plans to finish or not, but I really am looking forward to a sequel! :yay:

#407614 · 7w, 58m ago · · ·
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>>393060thats what we all automaticly when someone hasent uploaded any thing in a long time,am i right?:unsuresweetie:k

#403662 · 7w, 2d ago · · ·
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>>248696 get everyone to sign this :flutterrage: FOR THE WEBSITE!!!!!!! Happy april fools day. http://www.change.org/petitions/poultron-stop-just-stop

#397825 · 7w, 5d ago · · ·
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>>393060

Yes, my friend. And his ghost still haunts Fimfiction.net, tormenting those who ask if the author is dead just for not updating their story...:pinkiecrazy:

#393060 · 8w, 23h ago · · ·
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Are you dead? :fluttercry: Why no new chapter?

#379806 · 9w, 10h ago · 1 · ·
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Any word on when 'In Our World' might update?

#370432 · 10w, 5h ago · · ·
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great story (finally caught up) cant wait for your next update on In Our World :heart::twilightsmile:

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***WARNING: SPOILERS if you haven't finished the story yet***

I've pushed this up a day and a half due to a (rather large) misconception about the story, which, if I was a good enough writer/proofreader/actuallygotosleepsometimeperson I would have noticed, but I did NOT. Therefore, there's a lot of misunderstanding. That being: Twilight is NOT the professor. If I were to explain any further, it would be spoilers, but think about the whole thing Jamie is doing for Fluttershy: being her 'Caretaker', if you will. By the time I post this, I'll have edited the last paragraph of that story to how I intended it to sound. I feel like an idiot for doing that, but also in my defence, I know what's coming, so I failed to see it that way, and I can see that I was accidentally suggesting that Twilight was the professor. Curses. But I suppose that's what hurrying for a deadloine gets you Dx Anyway: ON TO THE QUESTIONS!!

Q: Is there going to be a sequel?

A: By FAR the most asked question: Simple answer, yes, KIND OF. I can't say anymore because it will be spoilers. However, I will say there's six more stories I'll be writing. Tomorrow, I'll post a rather large teaser as a new chapter so you can all see what you think, and if there's anything I  should really change in case it ruins the story. Oh, and the perceptive of you will notice the story is now called In Our Wold - Kindness. I'm sure you can figure stuff out from there :3

These next two parts weren't asked, but I feel at least some people will want to know: Is this the end of In Our World - Kindness? and What happens to them? The answer is: Yes and no. Technically, this is the end of this physical story (in terms of what you see on 'Stories by this Author'), but it isn't the end of THE story. It will continue as if there's been no gap, at a later time. Think of it as a new chapter, but on a grander scale. I'm not just gonna leave you guys hanging when it really started to go places. I mean COME ON, they didn't even kiss yet! That would be cruel.

Q: Was the assistant (that Jamie saw) Spike?

A: No, that's a normal(ish) assistant to the nowhere-near-normal professor (who is, again, not Twilight Dx)

Q: How did Twilight get there? Can she travel between dimensions at whim?

A: How did Fluttershy get there? Ooooh, mystery, ooooh, ooooh, whatcha gonna do? :D And no, she can't anymore than Fluttershy can. That's up to Doctor Whooves (who may or may not appear at some point as a kind of Easter Egg. Meh.)

Q: Was the university an illusion?

A: No, it's a real place (In the story. It doesn't exist otherwise. And on an unrelated note, I chose Lanzhou because reasons)

Q: What happens to Jamie?

A: Again, you'll have to wait and see until this is continued at a later date...

Q: Is this going to be a series - magic, kindness, generosity, laughter, loyalty, honesty?

A: I believe I may have answered this is the Sequels question :3

Not as many questions as I answered them sooner, but if you still have one/several/millions, PM me and I'll answer through a reply. As long as I can. I won't give spoilers ^^

Thanks to everyone that read the story, I'm glad you all liked it so much. Turns out I have some skill, I guess xD Seriously, you're all great and I read every comment. Thanks for the support ^-^ I know some people didn't like how it ended, but hopefully this explains it, and changes your opinion hopefully a little bit.

Ph4ntom S33ker · 198 views · Edited 6w, 5d ago

My stories (go check them out :D)


In Our World - Kindness

I was walking through the forest, planning on going home after an unsuccessful day of drawing, but then I meet an obstacle. A pink haired obstacle, to be exact. She's lost, confused and thinks she was a pony, and I have to help her.

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The Stranded Pilot

A pilot flying an experimental jet over the North Sea is struck by lightning and transported to another world, and now he has to do something about it.

Warning: I hate this story, and I wrote it, just as a warning.

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Random Writing

This is where I put everything that I write (and am willing to show) that doesn't fit in my main stories. That can be anything from random scenes/scenarios are I thought were funny/touching enough to post, to ideas (maybe teasers) for one of my main stories that will appear 5+ chapters later on, to back story if its requested. RS is Random Scene, DS is Deleted Scene, BS is Back Story

WARNING: UTTERLY RANDOM, MAY CONTAIN TRACE LEVELS OF D'AAWWWWW, N/A AMOUNTS OF LOL, POSSIBLE SAD

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7,356 words ( 7 chapters ) · 408 views  ·  13  ·  0  · 

New Pony In Town

This is my first story, I wrote it originally on FanFiction but now I've made an account here, I've decided you guys shouldn't be left out.

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