Anypony still alive? · 4:05am
"Someone, anyone. Respond!"
Long before the sisters took power, when the Great Serpent rained chaos down over the land during the Age of Chaos, the land was tediously protected by free-lance heroes. Each one of these heroes, spurned by an event in their past, traveled the dangerous lands in search of evil to vanquish and monsters to slay. Some were in it for the glory, but the strongest of heroes were pure of heart, and of sound morals.
Gemstone, a young hero in the Province of Eeust, defends the region around Foal Mountain. His life as a hero was proceeding as normal until he was sent to investigate a long forgotten mine-shaft. Within he finds a strange portal, and through a bizarre series of events, somehow brings a female version of himself through the portal. When their friendship develops into something more, they vow to find a way to be together, even when the very fabric of the universe wants to tear them apart.
Sometimes things get so bad you just have to block them out. There were no rock farms. There were no parties. An abusive father, an alcoholic mother, a bottle of Ritaline, and memories she had to repress. All she had was one friend to get her through. A filly she could count on. However, with rapidly splitting paths, can the duo stay together through the trials of Pinkies life?
In an alternate universe, where Fluttershy's friends learned to simply tolerate her excessive anger and assertiveness, the 6 ponies have once again been called to Princess Celestia on an important mission. However, Fluttershy has her own plans for the meeting.
Just another idea I had bumping around in my head. Nothing special.
Derpy writes fiction, but she's never shown anypony before. What will happen when she finally submits her story to a popular writing forum?
Well a friend recently told me to upload this again and I can only pray that the mods let this through, because deleting it might have been a mistake.
However, I would like to point out this took an hour to write, it's nothing special and if you have criticism, sure, tell me, but I've heard it all before.
So here we go. just for the record.
Hello sir or madame,
I am Obsidian Raindrop the creator of a group known as The Great and Not Obsessive Trixie I am here to ask if you would like your story to be added to my group.
The only requirements are:
1. You have a story about Trixie and she is not completely obsessing over her lose at the hands of Twilight. (She can hate that she lost to twilight and even try and beat again but she just can't be be so obsessive like she is in most stories. )
2. She may be a supporting character or a main character it does not matter.
3. i can`t think of a third thing
It's me Osidian again asking you guys to do stuff you don't want to.
1. tell me the name of your story and the one folder you want it in
2. join the group it is really cool and we'll soon get a banner up
3. fallow because it will boost my confidence
Sorry to all those who either received this email twice or who don`t have trixie as a main or supporting character. Also just PM me if you want your story added.
Yours truly, Obsidian Raindrop
>>95295
Haha, well thank you very much, that means a lot to me
I'll definatly give yo ua call if I need encouragement (which is whenever some ill-willed troll attacks me), I have a very thin coat.
I meant to write this ages ago...but if you're ever feeling down about your writing again, feel free to message me or something. I mean, I've been told I'm a pretty good listener if you want to rant or anything too. And I'm fairly available when not at work (which happens to be McD's.).
>>8549
No your right. I'm not stopping either, I was just tired of people telling me the same things over and over again for that story. I want to get featured for something I took time writing. Not something I dashed off in an hour or so.
Not to mention I certainly don't want to be criticized so harshly for something I didn't even try on.
>>7991
I'm not swiming with the big fish.
you don't see me stopping do you?
>>7992
Well you haven't seen the last of it. Don't worry!
And I don't mind a little ego from people who deserve it :)
I've seen your page, you're successful. Good for you!
And yes! Improvement. I didn't think that story would attract any attention at all, now that it has, overhauls WILL be taking place.
>>7991 I'm not trying to inflate my ego or anything, but I'm fairly successful and I found this to be an excellent piece. You have to start somewhere right? But I'm glad to hear your putting effort into improving it, that's always a good thing.
>>7989
I need to write it better if I'm going to swim with the big fish -.- felt like I was losing respect as a writer.
Aw man, you deleted that story? That was a legit good read for many people. So a few people didn't enjoy it? It was featured for a reason.
It's your story to do as you please though. <3
>>7936
That's good to know. Killing creativity leads to banality.