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Pascoite 8618

Joined October 2011
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    Pascoite's Stories (8)

    • But You Surpass Them All
      Applejack enjoys her family's Mother's Day tradition

      8,759 words · 2,720 views · 196 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Smooth Sailing
      The Mane 6 win a day cruise, and everything is ship-shape. Or not.
      5,128 words · 2,478 views · 142 likes · 2 dislikes
    • My Funny Sister
      Rainbow Dash shares a painful moment from her past with Scootaloo
      12,497 words · 23,574 views · 247 likes · 6 dislikes
    • The Promises We Keep
      Big Mac helps Derpy through the fight of her life, but will their love survive the aftermath?
      11,139 words · 5,106 views · 220 likes · 7 dislikes
    • Nom de Plume
      2,657 words · 1,669 views · 145 likes · 4 dislikes
    • Author, Author!
      7,219 words · 2,254 views · 154 likes · 5 dislikes
    • A New Harmony
      21,055 words · 2,696 views · 40 likes · 3 dislikes
    • Tales of Interest!
      8,093 words · 663 views · 25 likes · 3 dislikes
    Sep
    17th
    2012

    Empty Queue! · 3:42am

    Never thought I'd see this happen, but the review queue for Ponychan's Training Grounds thread is empty! I've been a reviewer there for 9 months and helped a lot of writers. Anyone who'd like some story advice is welcome there, and wait times will be very short, for now at least. Of course, anyone willing to try their hand at reviewing is welcome as well, though we're not currently short on assistance.

    Pascoite · 80 views
    Mar
    3rd
    2012

    Derpy revisited · 6:42am

    Well, one of the writers has weighed in, which EqD posted in this link.  I have to say, her response was completely classy and reasonable, and I agree with her 100%.  I never thought Hasbro intended to make fun of anyone.  However, the fact is that some people do use that term to ridicule, and I'd rather see erring on the side of caution in this instance.  Granted, Ditzy isn't exactly the best name in that regard, either, but at least historically it carries more of a connotation as a somewhat endearing quality.  Either way, her parents named her, and what does that say about their ambitions for her future?  It was also a bit over-the-top to take the leap from occasional clumsiness to walking/flying disaster area.  What are the prospects for anyone like that to have friends?

    In any case, i didn't feel that strongly about it, and once Hasbro had made a decision, they shouldn't have backtracked.  If her name's Derpy, and she has a low-ish voice, then so be it.  But kudos to Amy Keating Rogers for her well-thought-out and heartfelt response.

    Pascoite · 22 views
    Jan
    22nd
    2012

    Derpy · 6:44am

    So, Derpy's the official name.  Can't say I like it.  To me, "Ditzy" implies relatively harmless absentmindedness.  "Derpy" implies stupidity.  It's mean-spirited.  They might as well have called her "Special Ed" or some such.  Is this really what they want to teach the kids?  Oh, well.  I guess I have some search-and-replace editing to do.  And I suppose "Ditzy Doo" is now assumed to be the blue Derpy lookalike that was seen bringing the birds back during Winter Wrap-Up.

    Pascoite · 54 views
    Dec
    25th
    2011

    It's not dead! · 3:08am

    For those of you who read "A New Harmony" (yes, there actually are some), I'm sorry about the lengthy delay in getting Chapter 4 posted.  I haven't even started on it yet, due to a combination of holiday happenings and trying to whip The Promises We Keep into good enough shape for EqD.  I hope to get started on it within the next couple of weeks and get it posted mid-January.  It'll likely be the last chapter.

    Pascoite · 26 views
    Nov
    19th
    2011

    New story progress · 11:48pm

    Chapter 3 of "A New Harmony" will probably go live tomorrow.  It's in final edit mode.

    New side story to "My Funny Sister" is finished, but I will probably sit on it for a while to see if there are any more canon developments forthcoming that I need to account for with Ditzy/Dinky.

    Halfway through Chapter 3 of 5 for a Slice of Life story called "Twilight's Final Exam" that I'll start posting when it's complete.

    Chapter 4 completed of a shipping fic called "Duet in the Folk Style" that I may start posting soon.

    Halfway through a one-shot Cowboy Bebop crossover.

    Pascoite · 16 views
    Nov
    4th
    2011

    Okay, first blog post!  I figured I'd get some news out there about what I'm working on.

    I've gotten about 15% of the way through "A New Harmony" chapter 3, but progress is slow.  This was my first fanfic, and it got accepted over at Equestria Daily with very little revision.  Then it got ripped over there, starting a little above 4 stars, bottoming out around 2.5, and finally settling around 3.1.  As my first story, I didn't know the conventions about what tags to put on stories, and labeled it comedy since I sprinkled humor liberally throughout, even though the plot itself isn't funny.  I got bombed by a lot of people who expected a funny story and didn't get one.  Plus, from what I hear, there's some reflexive bombing that goes on over Dark as well.  Ok, lesson learned, but apparently over at EqD, tags get set in stone.  They wouldn't remove the comedy tag or update the character list when I added chapter 2.  In short, that whole experience has really sapped my enthusiasm for writing this story.  I promise I will finish, but it may be a little slow.

    As a precaution against this happening again, I've basically decided to adopt the practice of finishing an entire story before posting any of it, then releasing a chapter every 2 weeks or so.  In addition to continuing "A New Harmony," I've finished 2 (of probably 5) chapters of a Slice of Life story about Twilight Sparkle; I'm about 10% of the way through chapter 3 of a shipfic; I'm nearly halfway through a one-shot sci-fi crossover that may develop into a series; I've got the plot planned for a one-shot side-story to "My Funny Sister," and would like to write a sequel if I get an idea worthy of it; and I've got basic ideas for another crossover and another sadfic.

    That said, I am sometimes dismayed at the way many people vote on stories, as it doesn't seem to push everyone toward better literature.  Oddly enough, IMO, it's even worse over at EqD.  *gets on soapbox*

    When I vote, I consider 3 things: quality of premise/plot, writing style, and grammar/spelling, in that order.  I don't believe it's fair to vote down a story because it doesn't suit my tastes, so if it meets my 3 criteria (well-written, believable, mechanically correct), I'm willing to give it a good rating, even if I didn't like it per se.  I will not vote down a story if I wasn't drawn in by the description.  If I decide to read it anyway, by rating, recommendation, etc., I will vote positively if I am pleasantly surprised, but will not vote it down if I don't like it, since it's not fair to the author for me to put myself into a situation where I should have known I wouldn't like it.  In that case, my vote is in the form of refusing to increase the story's view count.  I will only vote down a story if I think I should have liked it, but didn't, and again, even then there would have to be significant problems in style, plot, or mechanics for me to justify it as other than a difference in taste.

    I'm just tired of seeing authors who are obviously talented get trashed because their stories don't have wide appeal, and other authors who rate a 4.9 even though the plot is incredibly simplistic and there are 2-3 mechanical errors per sentence, just because it's about a popular shipfic coupling, or focuses on everyone's favorite character.  Just my two cents' worth.

    Pascoite · 24 views