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    Owlor's Stories (21)

    • Cool Jazz
      A stallion is trying to get Twilight's attention. It isn't going so well.

      1,823 words · 435 views · 45 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Sky Matron
      In a world where two of the three tribes died out, Rarity turns to the sky as a sky pirate.
      33,435 words · 525 views · 36 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Fiddle Made of Gold
      Discord went down to Ponyville, he was lookin' for a soul to steal...
      2,464 words · 260 views · 15 likes · 0 dislikes
    • What you sat on...
      Octavia sends Pinkie Pie a letter laying down some facts about history, music-making and her personal life.
      1,979 words · 322 views · 26 likes · 2 dislikes
    • The Derpy Report
      16,151 words · 487 views · 24 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Silly Assumptions
      1,101 words · 287 views · 22 likes · 2 dislikes
    • S1LENC3
      3,007 words · 370 views · 16 likes · 1 dislikes
    • In The Business of Making Ponies Happy
      1,543 words · 205 views · 10 likes · 0 dislikes
    • That Play
      11,275 words · 252 views · 10 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Dysphoria
      12,763 words · 265 views · 37 likes · 8 dislikes
    May
    3rd
    2013

    Doing a little spring cleaning in our Google Docs. Since all of us writing on Dypshoria are big fans of music, it's beginning to overflow with links to songs. This is just the first half of it  Some of these songs are from the planning stages and do no reflect the tone we ultimately ended up going for, others aren't supposed to represent the story as a whole, but only a character or a moment in it. It's a mixed bag, basically, covering a variety of genres and approaches. I can't promise you'll like all of these, but hopefully you'll find some of them interesting at least.

    1. Holy Mountains - System of a Down

    2. True North - Bad Religion

    3. Killing Time - She Wants Revenge

    4. The Curse of Millhaven - Nick Cave

    5. Paper Planes - M.I.A

    6. Shell Shock - Noisia

    7. Battle without Honor or Humanity - Kill Bill soundtrack

    8. The Future - Leonard Cohen

    9. The Becoming - NIN

    10. Ocean Club - Yello

    Owlor · 8 views
    Apr
    21st
    2013

    Me, Lucefudu and jMj, doing what we do best, weird stories. the "Cutie Dark Crusaders" is the very loose trio created basically as a joke, representing different flavours of darkfic writing (with me representing "light-dark" and generally being the Edd of the group.)

    Owlor · 33 views
    May
    5th
    2013

    Me and Lucefudu needed to mention dates in a story we're writing, and since the names of month have so much real world baggage, we created this as an alternative calender. The names are not set in stones and is mostly just suggestions. The main difficulty we had in compiling this was that he's from the southern hemisphere, and I'm from the northern, so we kept mixing up which month is is associated with which season. I'll TRY to explain our reasoning behind some of these...

    First Ember (November)

    Second Ember (December)

    Last Ember (January)

    This began a simply finding a pun on "ember", but we liked the metaphor of a fireplace slowly burning out, so we used it for the winter months.

    Purple Daze (February)

    Violets and amethysts are associated with february, it's a very violet month. It also happens to be the month where a certain owl is born...

    Water Bearer (March)

    This one was mainly Luces suggestion, since march is a very wet month in Brazil. (Their rainstorms do not fuck around)

    Daisy days (April)

    Daisies are associated with april, and it makes for a good pararell to "dog days"

    First Blossom (May

    We really liked the numbered month thing apparently...

    Soaring Sun (June)

    The summer solstice, and natually, Celestias own month.

    Dog Days (July)

    Dog days are a name used by romans and farmers for the hottest period of a year, generaly around july-august.

    Discordia (August)

    Since several months are named after empires, I thought it'd be funny if Discord named a day after himself  while he ruled, and noone really bothered to change it back.

    Last Blossom (september)

    Wake me up, when september ends...

    Melodious Moon (October)

    Of course Luna gets all hallows eve! Besides, the winter solstice is already taken.

    Owlor · 44 views · Edited 2w, 2d ago
    Mar
    31st
    2013

    My main file for the fanfic "Wearing Midnight", including the complete draft and the net chapter got corrupted, all I get is a strong of "#######" for seven pages. With some digging, I managed to find an earlier version of the draft, but it's missing the final chapter. Moreover, having to retype an entire chapter of a fanfic just kills motivation. In the end I think it's better for my sanity to simply put it on hiatus until I feel like tackling it again.

    Owlor · 6 views
    Mar
    28th
    2013

    Since I was discussing this recently, I figured I'd compile my thoughts about it.

    1. Silhouette.

    One of the main paradoxes of any sort of fan-design is how people will sit down and design a character to look as unique as they can, yet the result is very rarely memorable. I think a big part of the reason for this is that they forget about the Silhouette.

    The reason for this, I think, is that people plan their characters out like images, not like characters. They try to fill all the negative space, so the characters end up looking really cool (well, "cool") in a generic solo shot, but as soon as they have to actually interact with other characters or with the world, they end up looking like a big colourful rectangle more than anything else. A bunch of fan-characters together ends up looking like a bunch of guys cosplaying as a quilt.

    2. Colour.

    Leaving aside the "Sparkledog" school of design, (something you often see among furries, where they'll dump a bunch of neon colours on their fursona to make him stand out, with the result that the character looks like any number of generic technicolour furries....), this is another area where I think the problem is that people think of the characters as images, rather than elements to be included in an images.

    So, even if they don't go overboard with it, they end up putting a bit more colour than the character actually need. The result being, again, a character that looks good on its own, but stick out like a sore thumb next to the canon characters.

    When it comes to ponies, I'd say that the rule of thumb is one colour for the coat, max three, prefferably one, for the mane, unless there's a really good reason to break the formula. (Rainbow Dash for example, since the colours of the rainbow is usually seen as one "unit". In practice, RDs mane has only one colour, and that colour is "all of them")

    I'm becoming a little more tolerant of coat markings, I was actually regretting for the longest time to give my character his "snout stain", but I've softened on this a big. Spots and markings aren't unheard of, just not common. I'd say they are okay, but only if they got a character-related reason to be there (and "it looks cool" is not a character-related reason.)

    With Owly, the intention was to make him look a bit bird-like, hence why he's "owly. Most of the time, it doesn't really work, and it looks more like he has a scruffy blonde five-o-clock shadow... which is what I often have IRL being blonde and generally lazy, so it still works.

    I can't really help you with things like what colour clashes with what. I've never got the hang of it, and my opinion on some seems to differ from the norm. And anyway, the thing about designing characters is that their colours CAN clash, if there's a reason for it. Clashing colours will make the character look a bit mismatched and deranged, so it should be used with caution.

    The only thing you really need to know, however, is complimentary colour. It's the colour with the same saturation, but the completely opposite hue. Basically, it's what the colour would look like on a negative (people still know what photographic film is, right?)

    Complementary colours make each other stand out really well, something that' useful to keep in mind for design. However, pure complimentary colours stand out TOO well, on a character, the effect becomes eerie.

    Taking advantage of this is a good way to recreate the feeling of reading about a Mary Sue characters "vivid azure eyes" in a visual medium. In other words, you should prolly avoid it unless it is abislutely necessery for character-related reasons.

    Actually, the side effect of this fact is kinda amusing to me. Y'see, purple eyes are a rather popular MAry Sue characteristic, but with ponies it's actually a fairly common colour. I think partially because very few ponies are green, but many are some variation of red or blue, meaning that purple will blend pretty well with mot coat-colours without sticking out too much.

    Colours are often divided into "hot" and "cool" colours, with hot colours including red and yellow and cool colours including blue and green. For a balanced character, I'd say that using either the combination hot-hot-cool (two hot colours, one cool) or cool-cool-hot in their colour scheme is a good idea, with the odd colour out usually being the eyecolour.

    The reason it's called hot and cool colours is cus that's the association we have in our minds to them. Red, orange and yellow reminds us of fire, heat, danger, anger, that sort of thing and blue, green and cyan reminds us of water, cold, calm, sadness and things like that.

    Mixing in a cool colour with the hot ones help "ground" the character, at least in my mind. It'll make them seem more "natural" whereas having only hot or cool colours makes the characters look a bit eerie, like they are fire or ice elementals. This, I think is another reason why purple is a commonly used colour, it sorta straddles the line between hot and cool and can be used to subtly shift the balance back a little.

    Notice that Twilight are among the only ponies with about the same eyecolour as coat colour? It works for her cus purple doesnt necesserily have any associations to either hot nor cool, but it wouldnt work too much for anyone else, unless their entire personality revolves around a colour-indicated trait.

    3. Character-related reasons

    This is a weasel-word Ive used troughout this, mostly cus if I say "you gotta have a good reason to do it" some might think "I got a good reason, it looks cool!" It might look "cool", but it has no point unless it tells you something about the character.

    The problem with a lot of "cool" designs is that what little it tells about the character, it's either horribly stereotypical or it says something that the creator didn't intend to say.

    A typical Mary Sue character design, for example, would tell me that this is a character who tries too hard to be noticed, who desperately want to be special, but in the end is just like everyone else. Needless to say, this usually isn't what the creators intend to say with the design, at least not consciously.

    Same with dark colours. In the ponyverse, true black is usually reserved for genuinely Evil characters. Capital T Evil, rotten to the core, either trough corruption or else by it being their nature. But in the OCverse, its usually used to tell me that this character is a brooding antihero, which might just be one of the most boring character stereotypes ever.

    So, what I mean with "character-related reasons" is simply that if the character is interesting, and the choice you make helps to visually represent the character, then go for it. Jmjs "Darth Pinkamena" character for example, breaks the rule of not using too dark colours, but the point of the character is that she resembled Pinkie, only turned evil, which is an amusing juxtaposition if nothing else. So in this case, dark colours help drive that point home.

    Making an exception for character-related reasons is the best "second-tier advice" I can give. (Second-tier advice is what ive come to call writing tips that are useful for people who already know the chlichés, but struggle to evolve past simply avoiding them into knowing where and when to use them.)

    A common mistake I see people who knows about all the shit I've said before is that they'll make BLAND characters, characters that look like generic background ponies. The point of an OC should be to add something interesting to the universe, at least in the cases where the OC is important to the plot and not just background. The audience should be able to look at the character and go "okay, this is a character I'm interested in reading more about."

    Wrapping it all up, to make a good OC, at least by my estimation, pay attention to the silhouette, use colours with care and if you really wanna make him stand out from the pack in a GOOD way, give him something character-specific rather that something generically cool.

    A final note about cutie marks. Some designs are much easier to WRITE about than to draw. It's easy to for example that a characters cutie mark is a witch on a broomstick silhouetted against the moon, but if you are to draw this, youll have to draw a whole entire image worth of stuff just for that little detail. And in the end it's going to look way too detailed to be a cutie mark out of the show.

    Other designs might be easier to do, but harder to do well, like "half a comedy mask cutie mark, half a tragedy one". In practice, all you're going to end up with is a rather weird-looking assymetrical mask that doesnt even look like a face, cus faces can't smile and frown at the same time.

    This isn't necesserily a problem when it comes to stories, cus in text you can do things like that and it works. It becomes a problem, however, when a guy named Louis decides to do an illustrated audio adaption of your story and asks a swedish amateur cartoonist to illustrate a chapter, to take an example completely and utterly at random...

    Owlor · 38 views
    Mar
    16th
    2013

    [Art] Sunset Snow · 10:21pm

    Mar
    16th
    2013

    Out of Spit - Goto80 & Skuggan

    I've actually seen this guy live, Goto80, not Skuggan. (The one who ISN'T dressed like an anthropomorphic sallad.) There was a local 8-bit festival in town a coupla years back. Worth nothing in the clip above is that the kids they played for didn't like the music AT ALL, except for two panelists who got booed by the audience.

    [url]Some Say the Devil is Dead - The Wolfe Tones[/url]

    Allright, I really like folk music, deal with it.

    IT Must be Something Psychological - Katie Lee

    I'm not sure if Lucefudu would love this album or hate it, since pretty much every song is making fun of psychotherapy, espescially Freudian psychology. I tend to get mental images to music, since I'm an artist I'm allowed to without it being crazy, and the thing I picture to this song is some sort of gay love affair between Freud and Jung...

    Talking Seattle Grunge blues - Todd Snider

    Making fun of grunge, a little late perhaps, but still pretty funny. "Silence, musics original Alternative".

    Drink The Water - Justin Cross

    Hmm, MLP/The Backwater Gospel, would it work?

    Hades Town Anais Mitchell

    Between this, Nick Cave and Tom Waits, I think I might just have a fondness for the gritty Americana style of music...

    Wanna be a hippy - Technohead

    This song is absolutely terrible... and I still I like it. Call it a guilty pleasure of mine, I'l leave it here as proof that I'm NOT a music snob, no matter what my earlier song selecitons might imply.

    Harald - Sorkar och Strängar

    Get any swedish geek drunk, including me, and it's a roughly equal chance that they'll sing this song. I am not gonna translate it, for your sanity, but there's a translation in description. My LARPer friend tells me this is a VERY popular song on LARPs, go figure...






    Owlor · 11 views
    Mar
    15th
    2013

    Smells Like Content - The Books

    I admit, I got into The Books mainly because the title of the song "Read, eat, sleep" which describes a typical day of mine fairly accurately. Folktronica blending acoustic music and sound collages. I'm pretty sure that listening to this makes me a hipster, altough the fact that I usuall portrait myself wearing big black-rimmed glasses prolly sealed the deal already.

    Actually, I've had the same personal character for about six years, a blonde owl in glasses, and I've been very much amused how people's reaction to it gradually shifted from "Oh, it's a geeky owl!" to "Oh, it's a hipster owl!" Go figure...

    Energy Flash Joey Beltram

    Filling the dancefloors, old-school style.

    My Last in Baltimore - Poxy Boggards

    More of the "anime shanties" series, or rather its folk rock side series. I am ridiculously fond of drinking songs, prolly cus they are easy to sing, being off-key and off-rythm is a feature, not a bug. For the record, you know Owlor is drunk if he starts to sing this and if Owlor starts singing this it's probably time to get the wheelbarrow... (I am not translating this) I'm not sure where this would fit on the scale, prolly somewhere past the blackout...

    Women Respond to Bass - Renegade Soundwave

    Just to prove that I DON'T hate dubstep...

    Star Trek Philosophy - Gene Rodenberry

    This isn't a song per se, but a clip from a lecture about the Star Trek phenomenon, discussing the pover of fandoms an whether they can be used "for evil" so to speak. I think his conclusion are as true for ponies as it is for star trek, call me an optimist.

    How It Feels to Blossom - Nadine Mooney

    How does it feel to blossom? Guess we'll never know.

    OPening of the Mouth - Nile

    WARNING: Death metal, your brain WILL melt, and not necesserily in a good way. The combination of extreme metal and anchient egypt actually works quite well, I mean, the singer is gonna sound like a 10 000 yeard old mummy being awakened from his slumber by a wedgie anyway, might as well work with it....












    Owlor · 22 views · Edited 9w, 4d ago
    Mar
    15th
    2013

    My notes for this chapter contains the words "Sunset Snow", capitalized like that, and I can't figure out if its supposed to be a pony name or not. I suspect what I meant was "Sunset. Snow..." cus the full line is "Sunset Snow gently trickling down in flakes" and if "Sunset Snow" is supposed to be a pony, then the scene takes on a whole different context.

    Owlor · 20 views · Edited 9w, 4d ago
    Mar
    14th
    2013

    I'm just gonna dump some interesting songs I've been listening to lately

    Du Gamla Du Fria - Fågel Roc

    Finally I've found a version of the swedish national anthem I like, and the only one accurately portraying the diversity of cultures in Sweden, we aren't all blue and blonde-eyed, y'know? This is just a one-minute sample, but the full song is on spotify as well as a dub version called... guess what? "Dub gamla Dub Fria." I could not approve of this more.

    Walking Trough Your Town in the snow (cover) - Utah Philips

    That's it, why I should I write any more when someone's already managed to capture everything I've strived to capture in one song? Well, obviously it doesn't mean I'll stop writing, sometimes creativity is a compulsion, but this is a folk song that blows me away by how simple and perfect it is.

    Conna Be an Engineer - Peggy seeger

    Girl Power! I'm waiting for someone to create a steampunk ponyfic based on this song.

    Black Wings - Tom Waits

    Another one I've been wanting to fanfic, I just like the idea of having this mystic character you never see except trough rumours and second-hand accounts that all contradict each other. What's been holding me back is the fact that the characters would APPEAR very much like a Mary Sue due to how much would seem to revolve around her, but in actuality, she might not even EXIST, except as a rumour. It's an intruiging idea.

    Bahamut - Hazmat Modine

    Yeah, I don't even know...

    Hymn to Herne - Sj Tucker

    Who' Herne? Well, he's basically a ghost in English folklore who inexplicably has antlers on his head. "The horned one" is a common archetype in paganism, so many neopagans try to connect these legends to older pagan deities. How true that is, I don't know, but it's certainly a demonstration of how pagan elements manages to survive in folklore even in an ostensibly christian country like England.

    Roll the old Chariot along - Traditional

    I love the "Anime shanties" youtube series, fanart of anime characters combined with recordings of traditional sea shanties, cus its proof that someone else out there has just as weirdly specific interests as me. On spotify, there's a version of this with an all-female choir, and if I can just get my hands on that as an MP3, I'll totally make a "Pony shanties" version of it. Which ponies do you think is most likely to go to sea?

    Owlor · 29 views · Edited 9w, 5d ago