WIP

Aldous is the Royal Engineer.

He is responsible for creating many of the things you see in Equestria today,

but unfortunately, his job takes time from his family.

His only family.

Edit 7/31/12:

JEEBUS KIRST I HAVEN'T UPDATED IN A WHILE.

I'll start working ASAP.

Tartarus is guarded by the three headed dog Cerberus.

But an ancient evil is on its' way back to the surface.

And only a pony older then Equestria can stop it.

For who knows how long, Equestria has not been involved in any foreign affairs.

But when rumors begin to float around about a bipedal creature,

Investigations are made.

And discoveries become inevitable.

(-Aside-)

I thought of this a couple days ago, so I decided why not?

But as I was writing, I thought to myself.

This thing might become huge.

Seriously though, I'm stuck between making side stories or mashing it into this one fic.

So be patient, and maybe suggest what I should do?

Critique is appreciated!

Bon Bon and Lyra have been together ever since Lyra moved into Ponyville. They met, and they were great friends. Heck, Bon Bon even let Lyra live at her place.

But as of late, Lyra's been acting strangely, and Bon Bon wants to know why.

There is a reason why they say curiosity killed the cat.

(-Aside-)

This has been in my head for a little while, so, I decide I'll get it down.

But honestly, I don't think I'll forget when it's inspired by a song.

Here's the link:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ujzp9ffPwPM

It's actually a nice song.

listen to it some time.

BTW help me think of some tags.

I have no idea how to tag this story.

(UPDATE)

Wow.

Did not see that one coming.

Maybe I should've finished the story before I submitted it?

I appreciate any positive feedback.

But I would appreciate a reason for the dislikes.

I'm seriously stuck between finishing this,

and canceling it.

(UPDATE II)

Finished!

I definitely should have finished before submitting it.

I think you'll like the rest of the story.

...

In my opinion,

I think chapter 10 is the best.

Thank you for your time!

Everypony knows the tale of Nightmare Moon. The Princess of the Night fell weak to her mind and the Nightmare took over. But what if there is more to her than meets the eye? With the new players on the field, who knows what will happen? (You won't know the new guy unless you read my previous story, "Even Harmony has an Opposite." Don't worry, I can wait.)