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Change For The Better

This is a story of a young unicorn stallion named Night Star. who grow up on not knowing what family and having friends feel likes. All he had was himself growing up. After a fight with his caregivers, he was sent to the hospital. When he awoke, he found out he has family that he thought he didn't have. Thanks to the princess Celestria, he will be living with his cousin to start his new life in Ponyville. will Night Star finally Know what it feels like having a family, Friends, and maybe romance?


This is my first fanfiction  I would be grateful with feedback on your thoughts on how I can approve, how good it was, what you are confused on and etc. sorry about wasting your times if this fails.

I want to give my home boy Valen some props. for the cover . thanks bro.

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#497674 · 6d, 12h ago · · ·
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Dude, you just spammed my notifications!  What's up with that!? :rainbowhuh:

#415081 · 6w, 5d ago · · ·
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Thank you for the watch good sir/madam. I can only hope that in the future I bring as much entertainment.

#383402 · 9w, 1d ago · · ·
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Thanks for the watch.

#287349 · 17w, 6d ago · · ·
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thanks for the watch!

#286070 · 17w, 6d ago · · ·
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Thanks for the favs

#282203 · 18w, 2d ago · · ·
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Thanks for the watch!:pinkiehappy::heart::twilightsmile:

#282071 · 18w, 2d ago · · ·
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thanks for watching!

#282069 · 18w, 2d ago · · ·
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Thanks for the watch!!!

#281864 · 18w, 2d ago · · ·
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Jesus Christ, they really need to change that watching graphic. Anyway, thanks for stal...watching me!:twilightsheepish:

#281842 · 18w, 2d ago · · ·
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Thanks for the watch, too! You're too kind, good sir. :pinkiehappy:

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