He lives! · 5:32pm
I've got some great news! My editor is back in contact after a lengthy absence!
He's set to return to editing my work next week after his finals.
I'm currently reworking the latest chapter to take in account some issues people have pointed out.
Characterization for one. Big thanks to MachoManRandySavage for pointing this out and giving some help too!
While I seem to get the gist of the characters personality, I feel as if I'm starting to stray a bit from what makes the characters themselves. While yes I've done some out of character things, especially during the concert in Twilight's case, I don't regret it. My idea at the time for that was that Twilight did it as a sort of "thank you" for Rainbow's help in getting over her breakup, but also in order to help her friend with her shyness in terms of the guitar.
As usual, I'm very sorry for the constant delays and excuses.