Loveliest of Trees... from Fluttershy’s PoV? · 6:50am Oct 5th, 2020
I’ve been writing a story from the female’s PoV, and it’s really interesting and fun. It presents a challenge with first person, which is losing the omnipotence you have as the author, and also not projecting omnipotence into the character themselves. It’s challenging but fun.
I’ve been thinking... what if I overhauled Loveliest of Trees to be from Fluttershy’s PoV as she interacts with Coppermane. And we can learn about him through her eyes. More showing instead of telling.
Hello, Nordryd, I'm a huge fan of your works. My mind is glued and my heart just flutters and beats faster whenever I feel the want to read your tales. I just thought I'd share with you my personal ranking on your fluffy The Cute, the Fluffy, and the Romantic series and beloved Coppershy series.
For your CFR series (from least favorite to most favorite):
Reaching (What can I say? Sunset Shimmer is as you described her. She's perfect in both personality and physique. I can't get her out of my mind or envision my dream girl that doesn't match her personality. Her struggles are understandable and relatable as I've done some stupid things in my life (just small in comparison). My Celestia, what I'd give, provided I have the nerve and confidence, to find a girl like her and treat her as every bit as the princess angel she would want to be.)
And now for your beloved Coppershy (From most favorite to least favorite; only going from Sweet and Delicate to Green Leaves of Everfree)
Insecurity (Not hating this; it's just another episode of Copper bullying himself and Fluttershy swooping to remind him why he's so special.)
Anyways, this was my two bits on some of your finest. You still have some more favorites of mine, but I just wanted to share with my thoughts on your two main collections. So, as a fellow fanfic writer, keep writing the best of writes and brony on.
Love your stories Nordryd !!!
Give it a read and be the judge
(Shout At The Devil, I mean)
Thanks for the watch, trust me, my stories are worse. At least by the fandoms perspective. My stories just make fun of them lol.
So is Chapter 4 coming out