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Nonsanity 3168

Joined April 2012
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    Nonsanity's Stories (3)

    • Words Failed Her
      A strange plague is attacking Ponyville and Twilight has to stop it... by giving up reading.

      7,163 words · 8,724 views · 1,266 likes · 17 dislikes
    • Rainbow Typhoon
      Rainbow Dash's dream of becoming a Wonderbolt means nothing to a hurricane.
      33,399 words · 2,044 views · 178 likes · 1 dislikes
    • Ever on the Edge
      Trust is everything to an immortal ruler. There is a reason why Equestria has no queen.
      2,464 words · 571 views · 74 likes · 0 dislikes
    May
    1st
    2013

    A New Story Begun · 3:46am

    I'm about 4,000 words into a new story. The idea came out of left field and I decided to run with it. It'll be a while before I release the first chapter, but I'll test out an early synopsis here:

    Freakish creatures live in the frozen moments between seconds, unseen and unknown. They live and die among unmoving statuary, unable to make any impact upon the world. Once, or so their stories go, one of the statues came to life.

    For Rarity, it's just another day, another dress. But when unexplainable things start to happen around her, she ends up lost and alone, a stranger in a strange land: her own backyard.

    Hopefully, that sounds interesting. I'm getting more and more excited about the whole thing as get farther into it. :)

    EDIT: (I'll probably be seeking out early plot and flow pre-readers at some point.)

    Nonsanity · 43 views · Edited 3w, 3d ago
    Apr
    19th
    2013

    I'm putting together a simple audiobook recording of Words Failed Her. To make sure the sound levels are working across many different systems, I wanted to put up a short snippet and see what people think? If it's good, I'll do the whole story like this and link to it here in the blog and from the story itself.

    So if you have one minute and 34 seconds to spare, take a listen and tell me how it sounds. Thanks! :)

    Words Failed Her - Test 1 (MP3)

    Nonsanity · 41 views
    Mar
    30th
    2013

    That's right. At long (long, long, long) last, Rainbow Typhoon is complete, with every chapter cleaned and edited.

    I think I'm happy with the way it turned out, even. :)

    Nonsanity · 46 views
    Mar
    20th
    2013

    After way, WAY too long, chapter seven of Rainbow Typhoon is nearing it's final cleanup and will soon be posted to FimFiction. This is a big moment in the story, and we finally get to the point for which the cover picture was created! There will be at least one more chapter before all is wrapped up and done, and work there is well under way.

    Rainbow Typhoon will soon be complete!

    I warmly thank anyone who returns to this tale after my too-long absence. I hope it's been worth the wait. (Probably not, but I can hope.) Have fun reading it. I had fun writing it.

    Nonsanity · 45 views · Edited 9w, 3d ago
    Feb
    25th
    2013

    Ouroborial Aid · 9:13am

    "Gah!"

    His quill shot through the air faster than an arrow, leaving behind a faint contrail of ink before burying its tip in a wooden post on the far side of the room. It wasn't the first of its kind embedded there, and he guessed it wouldn't be the last.

    This will not work!

    He rose from his seat in front of the cluttered worktable and stomped over to the narrow stone window. There wasn't enough of a breeze entering the library's workroom to stir his matted black mane, and the light from the setting sun cast a stripe of sickly orange across his gray-green coat. The frown that creased his homely face fit perfectly with the rest of his disheveled appearance.

    He scratched at his itchy chin as he stared at the sunset.

    He stood there lost in thought for some time before a buildup of new magical energy crept into his awareness. A rustle of paper and a surge of light behind him made his ears perk up, but he didn't turn around.

    Again?

    He continued to stare out the window, ignoring the flickering light which was growing steadily brighter. A crackling hiss filled the room while flashes of lightning strobed his shadow against the stone wall. He swished his tail impatiently, shaking out the tingles caused by stray magical currents. He'd seen all this before—no need to turn around.

    The light and noise ceased abruptly, leaving only the sound of disturbed papers fluttering to the ground and the faint creak from the floorboards as the newly arrived visitor shifted position.

    "You are giving up," said the elderly voice behind him. It wasn't a question.

    At first he planned to deny it, to insist that there were still avenues left to explore. Before he could bring the words to his lips, however, he realized that he had given up. He'd been chasing dead ends for weeks now, and no option left to him looked any better than the others.

    Of course he knows I'm giving up now and he knows the answer to my problem. He's just waiting for me to ask for it. He never gloats—how could he—but it rubs me the wrong way every time he does this.

    "You may not like taking 'the easy way out,' as you once put it, but there is a reason behind all that I—that we—do. You should know this by now," said the visitor.

    They'd had that conversation before—more than once. This is the sixth time he's come to me! That didn't make this any easier, however. He sighed and turned around.

    An old unicorn stood hidden in the shadows of the darkening workshop, one hoof lit by the stripe of sunset light that angled across the floor. He wasn't doing anything in particular, just watching the settling dust flash as bright little motes in the sunbeam as it drifted back to the ink-stained floorboards. Damn him and his casualness!

    The beard was longer than it had been last time but just as gray, and he still had the same silly hat.

    The elderly visitor looked up and they stared at each other for a moment or two, examining the differences that time had made to them both. Then the older one said simply, "It is a problem of topography."

    A snort of derision came in reply. "I know that much already!"

    The elder tipped his head to the side. "I see you have stopped shaving."

    The younger touched his fuzzy chin with one hoof. He had stopped worrying about the beard recently. It was slightly embarrassing now considering how emphatic he was at their last meeting about remaining beardless. He didn't want a beard, but of course, that—like this conversation—was apparently inevitable.

    He sighed again and picked up one of the larger scraps of parchment from his desk, its surface densely covered with his tight little scrawl. He shook it in the air. "This! It isn't possible to complete the sequence from within. The feedback it would create couldn't be dampened without rupturing the whole spell. The center must be inherently unstable—the laws of magic demand it!" He threw the paper down on the floor between them.

    His visitor merely nodded slowly as if in perfect agreement, a green shimmer forming around his horn as the parchment rose into the air before him. "You are not wrong. The feedback would be disastrous." The paper started to bend and fold, taking on a three dimensional shape as he spoke. "All the power will be drawn inexorably towards the center point of the spell until... pop." He chuckled quietly before his horn flared and the paper twisted in a strange and unnatural way. He floated it over to land lightly on the worktable.

    The younger stared at the old unicorn for a moment, wondering what he was up to, then turned to look at the paper.

    It was a torus—a doughnut shape. He stared at it and at its empty center. This is the answer! A stable shape with a center outside its own volume. But how did he—

    A white glow was beginning to surround his guest, building slowly. This visit was over. He had what he needed to progress with the spell now, or at least he had the direction in which the answer lay. It was a topological impossibility and something he never would have thought of on his own, but he was sure he could make it work—given time.

    It was inevitable, after all.

    He squinted into the brightening glow. "Goodbye, Star Swirl... the bearded," he said sarcastically.

    "Farewell, Star Swirl the Unshaven," said his older self with a chuckle as he faded away.

    The younger Star Swirl turned to look again at the folded paper as the light vanished... with a pop. He brushed a wayward lock of dark hair from of his eyes.

    "I swear I'm never going to invent this time travel spell. That'll teach him."

    [end of preview]

    The whole story, to which this is a very minor scene, has been chewing at the inside of my brain for months. The scene is almost as old. The story attempts to describe who Star Swirl was, and why. His origins, his driving needs, and some of the deeds—known and unknown—that led him into the limelight of history. I'm afraid Twilight would be rather shocked at some of what her hero did along the way. He was not a perfect pony, but he might have been more influential in pony history than even she could guess... good and bad. His heart was definitely in the right place and his goals were good goals, but Celestia was absolutely right when she said he didn't understand friendship. With his background—this background—how could he?

    Nonsanity · 91 views
    Aug
    30th
    2012

    I was surprised to see that both the Like and Favorite counts for Words Failed Her are both over 800 now. As a result, I'm going to promise a new add-on chapter if either breaks 1,000. Twilight's quick actions saved her from the curse, but as a result she didn't see much of the curse's effects on the rest of Ponyville.

    So at 1,000 I will tell you of what happened at Sweet Apple Acres. You see, Big Mac was reading a fairy tale to Applebloom—she loves the silly voices he does. (Yeah, I want to hear him too.) Soon the whole farm is caught up in the effects except for a very confused Applebloom who does all she can to—

    Well, I can't give it all away here. ;)

    Nonsanity · 47 views
    Jul
    19th
    2012

    Thanks to the diligent efforts of the amazing shinepawpony, the custom cover art for Rainbow Typhoon is complete! It's everything I hoped it would be, and then some.

    Now I just have to finish the story... ;)

    Nonsanity · 30 views
    Jun
    9th
    2012

    Word From Me · 6:17am

    I can honestly say that I never expected the first story I've written since college—that I actually finished—would ever be read by so many people! Had I known, I would have put so much more time and effort into it. This took me completely by surprise.

    Since the first big burst from the EQD started rolling in, mere minutes after I made the last edit, I've been checking back constantly to read everyone's comments. Favorites and Likes are wonderful and are a great way to gauge how popular stories are, but it is the comments that I truly adore. Good or bad (and they've been overwhelmingly good, to my delight) I read them all eagerly. The critiques and reviews of a less than positive nature get a lot of my attention, because those are the ones that can help me improve.

    Ignoring the purely positive comments (and believe me when I say I don't actually do that) the view I've most often heard was about the story's length. It's interesting to examine the words used in these cases. They are usually in the form of, "It could have been longer," and not "it was too short" or "it was missing too much."

    I agree, it definitely could have been longer. Heck, I have no doubt I could have written 20 chapters to tell the same story. There would have been far more cases, spread over more time, maybe some sort of isolation ward to house the infected. Twilight's search for the cure could have taken her all over Equestria—even off to Canterlot to Star Swirl's library itself.

    If I had known how much people would be interested in the tale, I may have done just that, because that's how I normally write. Even back in college, when assigned to write a short story, I wrote chapter one of a novel. Because novels are what I've read all my life. Story in long form is natural to me.

    Breaking that pattern is what I sent out to do when I started writing Words Failed Her, as an exercise in more concise writing. I set myself a word limit (though a loose one) and wrote a short story. I didn't want to write half a story or a story so paired down that it couldn't float on its own due to massive plot holes. I wanted It small, tight, and complete.

    I can't say the plan was a complete success, but based on the results (feature box!) I definitely can't call it a failure.

    So, long story short (hah hah), for everyone that wished there was more... I'm sorry. I didn't know! :)

    But if I could err either too short or too long, I think this would have been my choice. Or, as one commenter put it, I'm glad my story doesn't overstay it's welcome.

    Thank you all so very much. I'm now thoroughly bitten by the writing bug. Expect more from me in the near future.

    (Longer this time!)

    ~ Nonsanity

    Nonsanity · 32 views
    Jun
    6th
    2012

    Words Fail ME · 3:41pm

    The Featured Box......... The Feature Box........ The Frickin' Feature Box!

    Nonsanity · 43 views
    Jun
    6th
    2012

    The title of the blog post says it all.

    Well, not quite all:    Woooooooot!

    http://www.equestriadaily.com/2012/06/story-words-failed-her.html

    And thanks to everyone here AND there for your encouraging comments. I'm staying up far too late reading them. (Though I'd probably be up anyway coughing. Mmmmm, strep.)

    ~ Nonsanity

    Nonsanity · 24 views