I'm splitting this into chapters so you can jump to your favourite pony. Please leave a comment, much like the changeling queen I require a constant and unhealthy diet of love/critiques to survive. Also it helps me improve and decide what to write next.

While waiting in line to receive her yearly school supplies Rarity finds herself learning a rather colorful lesson about the differences between whining and complaining from her mother.

This is a humanized story in an alternate universe, so please be aware before you dive in! Also, I’d be happy to get some feedback on what you think of this “version” of the world.