Feedback · 2:43am Dec 28th, 2012
I would like to know what you guys think about the story, where i could get better, what you like, what you dislike
so please give me some of your opinions i would really like to be a better writer
Edit: Please do anypony have tips on writing Big Mac's accent?
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