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Jun

5th

2015

Unsound is completed! · 7:40pm Jun 5th, 2015

I don't know what else to say...

Yep. Chapter four and five have been written, edited, all that good stuff - and posted. Finally.

It's taken me a week longer than I said it would due to a lack of wifi - but it's up and finished! Really, I'd love to hear what you say, and I hope you've enjoyed the story.

Thanks guys

~ Kayarei

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Top Faves

A Puppet To Her Fame My unicorn parents called me a worthless mud pony. They pushed me every day to overcome my lowly status. When I woke up one morning with my cutie mark, I thought they would love me. I couldn't have been farther from the truth. by Kaidan 29,713 words · 1,697 · 72
The Irony of Applejack Applejack has never told a lie. Merely... omitted some details about herself... by Mister Friendly 175,745 words · 3,465 · 83
Five Score, Divided by Four As a fan of the show, I always loved Rainbow Dash and her cutie mark, but I never wanted it to appear on my leg! Now that it has, all sorts of things are getting weird around here. I'm a guy, not a mare! Cartoon ponies aren't real... right? by TwistedSpectrum 277,593 words · 4,091 · 212
Lines and Webs In a world of peace, there must be Order. No matter what the cost. by Airstream 161,563 words · 1,398 · 54
Background Pony "My name's Lyra Heartstrings, but you won't remember anything. Listen to my symphony, for it by shortskirtsandexplosions 432,377 words · 6,807 · 242

These are my all-time favourites (especially 'A Puppet To Her Fame' and 'Background Pony') which I'm a little fond of, and make sure you have a look at the sequels to 'The Irony of Applejack' and the many side-stories to 'Five Score, Divided by Four'.

More Faves

A Hairy Problem Strange things are happening with Applejack after a mysterious wolf-like creature attacks her when she looks into the aftermath of another CMC incident. by BlueBastard 116,974 words · 601 · 19
The Secret Life of Rarity Rarity has a deep dark secret that she cannot control but must hide from the world. by BronyWriter 147,542 words · 1,723 · 94
Unwell Twilight Sparkle struggles to balance a new relationship with Rainbow Dash and her mental illness. by HazamaBrony 73,835 words · 1,126 · 37
Mood Wings The body language of wings. by Tchernobog 9,503 words · 4,177 · 61

Yet again, all sequels are worth the read and I hope you like them! FO:E really should be in my top favourites, but I wantedto highlight some lesser known favourites of mine. Also, Past Sins was the first fiction I read and really does deserve a place on my faves... If only I had more room!

Comments ( 18 )

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Vivid Syntax

Vivid Syntax #18 · Mar 15th, 2015 · · ·

Hi, Nightyarn! That's... a lot of Luna.

Thanks for checking out "Happy Hour!" Hope it brought a smile to your face, and if you've got feedback for any of my stories, I'd love to hear it. Take care!

Nightyarn

Nightyarn #17 · Aug 21st, 2014 · 1 · ·

1353905 I assure you, it's a great read!

(And yes, the Luna is necessary. )

Ardashir

Ardashir #16 · Aug 21st, 2014 · · ·

Thanks for the fave on Wolf in Pony's Clothing! It has a sequel, Manehattan Madness, which has more about Vespid than Ardi -- but the wolf will be back in another story rather soon.

Nightyarn

Nightyarn #15 · Aug 8th, 2014 · · ·

1325434 oh you damned holy devils... I love it!

Winter_Wolf

Winter_Wolf #14 · Aug 8th, 2014 · · ·

I've made you something for your birthday; It's on DeviantART and I think you'll like it
I was inspired by the bottom Gif of Luna and Fluttershy to make it :3
Edit:
Damn it, I forgot to send it :L
http://alari1234.deviantart.com/art/Gift-for-Jasmin-474155805?ga_submit_new=10%253A1407529533