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Proofreaders · 7:00am

Who wants to do a little proofreading for yours truly? The next chapter of A Day With Friends is done, as is the first chapter of FiMFriction, but for once I think I'll get a second (or third, fourth, etc.) opinion before I publish these, despite mine clearly being superior (if you actually take my cockiness seriously then you're an idiot).

Obviously you should tell me what qualifies you to be a proofreader (aka, I was in AP English, I'm an English major, or some better known stories you have proofread would all suffice), and if you list something that turns out to be obviously bullshit, then I'll... probably just never send you a chapter to proofread again. I can't nor do I care enough to think of a meaningful threat.

MyOpinionIsSuperior · 248 views · Edited 21w, 4d ago

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A Day With Friends

Rainbow Dash's son learns that he can always depend on his friends to help him with his problems. Or make them much worse.

Sequel to A Day With Dad

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/41832/A-Day-With-Dad

Blue words link to the character voices how I imagine they sound. Feel free to ignore them and have your own interpretation.

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FiMFriction

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A Day With Dad

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#343808 · 12w, 1d ago · · ·
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>>343626

Who knows. I'm trying to deal with school first.

#343626 · 12w, 1d ago · · ·
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Hey dude, when you finish A Day with Friends do you think you'll write stories about the other families?

#242557 · 21w, 4d ago · · ·
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How are you so awesome at writing stories!? :flutterrage:

#242419 · 21w, 4d ago · · ·
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Your stories are sweet and fun i like that + 1 follower

and also do you have an xbox or ps3?

Riz
#241896 · 21w, 4d ago · · ·
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>>168443

Hi there, I really enjoy the fic " A Day with Friends' but can you tell me who are the parents to the fillies please....I already know Rainbow Blitz..

#187586 · 27w, 4h ago · · ·
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Your stories seem excellent. I will read them later

#168443 · 29w, 2d ago · · ·
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>>167365

I've been fixing grammatical errors.

#168202 · 29w, 2d ago · · ·
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Where do I go to know when 'A Day With Friends' is up? I'll probably just have to watch you, I guess... :pinkiehappy:

Riz
#168170 · 29w, 2d ago · · ·
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>>163839

Can you tell me more about the Mane 6 and their kids ? What happen to Spike ?

#167484 · 29w, 3d ago · · ·
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cant wait for the sequel to a day with dad :D

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