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http://ponysquare.com/Mist/ mist@derpymail.com
User ID: 1,597
Registered: 2nd Oct 2011
Last Seen: 22h, 31m ago
Story views: 4,054

Hey, I'm Mist.

I'm pretty critical when it comes to reading stories, and I'm probably a good choice for you if you are looking for someone to give you an in depth critique about your story. You just have to not take everything I say to heart is all.

I also operate the group High Quality Fictions where we aim to showcase stories that are top notch, based not on popularity, but actual quality.

My favorite stories are [Dark], [Sad], and [Romance]. I've been known to enjoy stories in other categories though. If it's well written and interesting, I'll give it a chance. I'm not a huge fan of troll fictions, and I generally don't have much taste for clops either.

I'm a bit harder to please than most critics out there, but I try my best to be reasonable.

Oh, and in my spare time I create subtitles for the pony episodes. I'm trying to become the leading provider of quality subtitles for every episode in every possible language that would be desired. So far I have:

English

Portuguese

If you speak another language fluently and you'd be interested in translating for us, don't hesitate to PM me.

Check out our website: Mist Subs.

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[Sad] [Slice of Life]
Magic works in strange ways, and seems to manifest in every pony differently.
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Yes, over a month later, but I have a rough draft of Advance complete. I know, shocked I actually came through with what I said I would. I am more amazed I found time to write it. I suppose I can FINALLY give a little synopsis of what is going to be going on in this little story so here you go:

"The age of technology has come to Equestria, and sure enough it brings with it a lot of changes. The town is going through some changes, and Apple Bloom is too. Growing up can be difficult, but it's only harder when the world around you is changing so fast. That's what happens though, things are always changing... For better or for worse."

Obviously it's an Apple Bloom story to kind of "complete" the Cutie Mark Crusader trilogy here. A few other interesting reveals:

- Trixie's back story gets a bit more explanation.

- More Sweetie Belle.

- Takes place entirely after Bad Habit.

- Introduction to another mane six character.

All that is missing is a prologue that I wanted to fine tune (shouldn't take more than an hour or two to write) and then it's off to be proof read.

Little fun facts:

- I wrote this entirely on a tablet. (A Nexus 7 to be exact)

- We're looking at over 16,000 words officially making it the longest in the trilogy (just barely surpassing Bad Habit).

- Very odd music track I chose to listen to when I chose to make this one.

- It was written entirely in the 1 hour a day I got going to and from work over the course of over a month or so.


Also small update: Now that this is done I want to try and update A New Equestria.

Mist · 14 views

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Bad Habit

When it feels like you have no one you can count on, you'll turn anywhere for that little pick me up. Sometimes though, it can be a bad habit to have, and even harder to break when it gets you in deep. Growing up can be tough, especially when you feel like no one really understands you. Scootaloo learns the hard way in a tale of friendship, family and coming of age.

Almost a year in the making, the long awaited sequel to Like Me.

Cover image done by CypressPhoenix

Update 10/17/12: Fixed many errors, and reworded things to help make the story sound less "mechanical" also added an epilogue.

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Яarity

Winter is approaching in Ponyville, and all Rarity wants to do is work on her new winter garments, enjoy the holiday festivities and maybe even catch a chance alone with the pegasus she cares for most. That was before that day in early December when everything in Ponyville changed. Now it's a question of who a pony can trust, and who they can't.

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Just a Scratch

She's clever, musically gifted, and the most talented DJ in all of Equestria. She's Vinyl Scratch and she had it all, anything and everything she's ever wanted. That may be just the problem though: life is boring. With a constant desire for excitement Vinyl finds herself no longer amused with her day-to-day life. That all changes however when she meets a mysterious creature.

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Like Me

Magic works in strange ways, and seems to manifest in every pony differently. It's always about how one uses their gifts that magic has given them that matters. Sweetie Belle has learned one thing for certain in the past few years, and that is some gifts can quickly turn into a curse.

Featured on Equestria Daily: http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/11/story-like-me.html

Update 2/27/12: Fixed a flaw related to the "Sweetie only tried once", complaint. It now explains she attempted a few times.

Also minor grammatical errors.

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#319787 · 18w, 4d ago · · ·
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Hello sir or madame,

I am Obsidian Raindrop the creator of a group known as The Great and Not Obsessive Trixie   I am here to ask if you would like your story to be added to my group.

The only requirements are:

1. You have a story about Trixie and she is not completely obsessing over her lose at the hands of Twilight. (She can hate that she lost to twilight and even try and beat again but she just can't be be so obsessive like she is in most stories. )

2.  She may be a supporting character or a main character it does not matter.

3. i can`t think of a third thing

It's me Osidian again asking you guys to do stuff you don't want to.

1. tell me the name of your story and the one folder you want it in

2. join the group it is really cool and we'll soon get a banner up

3. fallow because it will boost my confidence

Sorry to all those who either received this email twice or who don`t have trixie as a main or supporting character. Also just PM me if you want your story added.

Yours truly, Obsidian Raindrop

#215291 · 28w, 2d ago · · ·
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Hello Mist!

I am Eddie, you say you do in depth reviews eh?

Perhaps you could review my story?

Cheers!

Eddie

#200749 · 29w, 5d ago · · ·
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A New Equestria is now one of my most favorite stories so far! Can't wait for the next update! :)

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowwild:

Dakota.

#152933 · 35w, 6d ago · · ·
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>>152839 I am in the process of hiring more pre-readers. :3

#152839 · 35w, 6d ago · · ·
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>>152798

Mostly here to poke about your High Quality Fics group.

#152798 · 35w, 6d ago · · ·
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>>152021 Not much, did you need something?

#152021 · 36w, 9h ago · · ·
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It's very quiet here.

Sooooo quiet...

*Steel knocks on the wall, creating an echo.*

...So what's up?

#93125 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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I'm liking the Avatar.

#76221 · 47w, 5d ago · · ·
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...So how's A New Equestria's chapter 15 progress going so far? I hope you upload soon!

#22480 · 58w, 1d ago · · ·
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>>21591 oops ya XDDDDDDD

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