Advance: It's coming · 4:20am
Yes, over a month later, but I have a rough draft of Advance complete. I know, shocked I actually came through with what I said I would. I am more amazed I found time to write it. I suppose I can FINALLY give a little synopsis of what is going to be going on in this little story so here you go:
"The age of technology has come to Equestria, and sure enough it brings with it a lot of changes. The town is going through some changes, and Apple Bloom is too. Growing up can be difficult, but it's only harder when the world around you is changing so fast. That's what happens though, things are always changing... For better or for worse."
Obviously it's an Apple Bloom story to kind of "complete" the Cutie Mark Crusader trilogy here. A few other interesting reveals:
- Trixie's back story gets a bit more explanation.
- More Sweetie Belle.
- Takes place entirely after Bad Habit.
- Introduction to another mane six character.
All that is missing is a prologue that I wanted to fine tune (shouldn't take more than an hour or two to write) and then it's off to be proof read.
Little fun facts:
- I wrote this entirely on a tablet. (A Nexus 7 to be exact)
- We're looking at over 16,000 words officially making it the longest in the trilogy (just barely surpassing Bad Habit).
- Very odd music track I chose to listen to when I chose to make this one.
- It was written entirely in the 1 hour a day I got going to and from work over the course of over a month or so.
Also small update: Now that this is done I want to try and update A New Equestria.








Hello sir or madame,
I am Obsidian Raindrop the creator of a group known as The Great and Not Obsessive Trixie I am here to ask if you would like your story to be added to my group.
The only requirements are:
1. You have a story about Trixie and she is not completely obsessing over her lose at the hands of Twilight. (She can hate that she lost to twilight and even try and beat again but she just can't be be so obsessive like she is in most stories. )
2. She may be a supporting character or a main character it does not matter.
3. i can`t think of a third thing
It's me Osidian again asking you guys to do stuff you don't want to.
1. tell me the name of your story and the one folder you want it in
2. join the group it is really cool and we'll soon get a banner up
3. fallow because it will boost my confidence
Sorry to all those who either received this email twice or who don`t have trixie as a main or supporting character. Also just PM me if you want your story added.
Yours truly, Obsidian Raindrop
Hello Mist!
I am Eddie, you say you do in depth reviews eh?
Perhaps you could review my story?
Cheers!
Eddie
A New Equestria is now one of my most favorite stories so far! Can't wait for the next update! :)
Dakota.
>>152839 I am in the process of hiring more pre-readers. :3
>>152798
Mostly here to poke about your High Quality Fics group.
>>152021 Not much, did you need something?
It's very quiet here.
Sooooo quiet...
*Steel knocks on the wall, creating an echo.*
...So what's up?
I'm liking the Avatar.
...So how's A New Equestria's chapter 15 progress going so far? I hope you upload soon!
>>21591 oops ya XDDDDDDD