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TLP

TLP #8 · Aug 25th, 2014 · 1 · ·

You

Yes you

I like you.

I will follow you.

Lilith911

Lilith911 #7 · Jul 18th, 2013 · · ·

I'm following you

Lord of Nothing

Lord of Nothing #6 · Mar 31st, 2013 · · ·

400048

I understand completely with the whole rushed thing, and I hope that a future project if mine will improve that aspect. The clop is something that I don't think will ever happen, but most people seem to like the teasing, so, again, maybe the future project will deliver.

Also, I've been blaming B:I for alot of things lately.

MintMetal

MintMetal #5 · Mar 31st, 2013 · · ·

396190 Yeah, no problem man. I faved the your story because of the way you set up the clop, you keep teasing it instead of just going straight into the saucy stuff. You also set up the second person POV quite well. I feel some events are a little rushed and confusing but I can look past that. Sorry for the late response, I blame Bioshock Infinite.

Lord of Nothing