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crazynitwit05@gmail.com midnight-specter http://midnight-specter.tumblr.com Skype ID: midnight-specter
User ID: 4,298
Registered: 24th Nov 2011
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Greetings.

Place of Residence - Melbourne, Australia

Age - 17

First Ponyfic - Hearts Aflutter

Best Pony - Mare Do Well / Rarity

Best Genre - Everything.

Best Ships - All the ships. All of them.

Things I Suck at Writing - Story descriptions that hook people and get them to read it. And probably comedy. I don't think I'm good at comedy.

Things I'm Good at Writing - I've been told by various entities that I do emotion very well, and that I never pull any punches in my stories; that it's my story, and I'm going to tell it, whether you hate me for what I do in it or not. Apparently that's a good thing.

Favourite People - Everyone who reads my stories. Any of them. All of you. Every single one of you. You're my favourite.

That is all.

- MS

Hearts Aflutter Re-Write Progress (Chapter 1 Excerpt)

She could feel it keenly: The wind’s gentle breath as it swept over her feathers; the terrifying distance between her and the ground, as she followed the rainbow streak ahead of her higher and higher into the air; the complete, utter freedom she felt as she soared with her friend through the great blue expanse of the sky.

It frightened her, but she didn’t let it show. It was a good kind of fear; the kind that while you never looked forward to the feeling itself, you always loved doing what brought it on.

She was flying. Without a motive, without any clear sense of direction, besides sticking close to Rainbow Dash - this was true flight, and it was a marvel. It wasn’t just for relocating frogs, or moving a little faster from one place to another; it was fun. It was exciting. And it was beautiful. She wondered how it had taken her so long to discover the fact that flight wasn’t just something she could do, but that it was a part of her. Even an essential one, as she’d come to realise. The butterflies that adorned her flank might have symbolised her own gentleness and love of nature, but they could fly too. That was a part of her which now, having experienced it, she regretted neglecting for so long.  

Fluttershy twirled gracefully through the air and followed Rainbow Dash up to a nearby cloudbank, where she came to a stop, panting a little. Rainbow, on the other hand, showed no signs of exhaustion or even mild discomfort, but that was to be expected. She was Rainbow Dash. If she wasn’t already the best flier in Equestria, there was no denying that she was at least one of the best. But Fluttershy wasn’t jealous. In fact, she was proud, and grateful. They’d been together for almost their whole lives!

If it wasn’t for Rainbow Dash, she’d never have gotten her cutie mark; she’d never have discovered her love for animals, or moved to Ponyville, or met Twilight Sparkle and her other three best friends... Rainbow Dash had changed her life, and here she was doing it again; the two of them, doing whatever they wanted, going wherever they pleased. This was part of Rainbow’s lifestyle, and it was quickly becoming part of Fluttershy’s too. That freedom, the feeling of joy she felt and just wanted to share with everyone... Flying for flying’s sake had fast become a favourite hobby, and one that she loved.

She looked over towards Rainbow Dash and smiled, letting the feeling wash over and through her. This was what she loved; time spent with just each other. Now that time was coming to a close, at least for today, but it would come again. Whether it was tomorrow, the day after, or even a week later, they’d take to the skies again. Just her, and her best friend in the world.

Rainbow trotted over to her, sporting a grin of her own. “You did good today, ‘Shy; you get better every time.”

“Oh, thank you.” She paused, taking a deep breath to settle herself down, and then continued. “But it’s really all thanks to you. I’d never have come this far without your help.”

She shrank back as Rainbow’s grin turned into a disappointed frown. “Don’t sell yourself short; you’re a lot better than you think, alright?”

“W-well, if you say so.”

“You better believe I say so,” Dash said, throwing a foreleg over Fluttershy’s shoulders and giving her a little squeeze. “I don’t fly with just anypony.”

“Alright.” She took another deep breath, finally managing to calm her nerves down, then dislodged herself from her friend’s embrace and peeked over the edge of the cloud. “Um, do you think it’s almost time for Pinkie Pie’s party?”

Dash’s eyes glazed over for a moment, until she slammed a hoof into her forehead. “How could I forget about that? Gah! ...What’s she throwing this one for again?” Fluttershy shrugged. “You’re probably right, anyway; it’s gotta be almost time. Let’s head down.”

She nodded, and they stepped over the edge into open space and began to glide slowly to the ground. Well, she did at least; as usual, Rainbow Dash flitted all about, doing maneuvers both complex and simple. Fluttershy marvelled again at the wonders of flight, this time at their different styles in particular. Some pegasi enjoyed the thrills of high-speed turns and freefalls, the rush of adrenaline they got when they flew; others, like herself, were content to drift lazily to the ground and let the wind guide them to their destination. She wondered briefly if a pegasus’ flying was reflective of their actual personalities. If the two of them were any indication at all, it was almost definitely the case.

There were times when being on the ground was just as good; she’d even once preferred it. But recently she would find her gaze drifting ever more skyward, to that infinite blue place she now so loved and so yearned for; when she looked up and saw that dash of rainbow trailing listlessly across the sky, she wanted more and more to join it.

All Things I Have Written


Ragtime Dandies

In which I write for the prompts of the Thirty-Minute Ponies blog, and also upload some other scraps and short stories. As you can expect, being written in half an hour means most of this stuff is pretty raw. Still, hopefully you'll get some kicks out of them every now and then. Some may be sad, some comedic, others dark or shippy - it depends on the prompt, really. Each story will be tagged for genre when it gets uploaded.

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Hearts Aflutter

It all begins with a night spent above the clouds�

Overnight, everything changes for Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash as they at last begin to realise that they�ve always been a little more than just friends. As they unravel their newfound feelings, discovering more about each other and themselves, they can't help but wonder if they both feel the same way � and after Rainbow Dash makes a mistake that could take a lifetime to mend, she fears that she may lose her closest friend forever.

Cover Art: Mornin' Sleepy Head, by Kiyoshiii at DeviantArt

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O Night Divine

It is Hearth's Warming Eve, and everypony in Equestria shares the joy and cheer of the wonderful holiday...

Everypony, that is, except one.

The legacy of Nightmare Moon continues to haunt Luna - ponies are still afraid of her, still distrust her, leaving her alone on a night like no other.

Who will take it upon themselves to help Luna find the happiness shared by all others?

Will the shadow of Nightmare Moon prove too much to overcome?

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Things You All Say

#407478 · 6w, 5d ago · · ·
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>>407466 Not necessarily. Considering you've been inactive for months, I'd say you're not making a name for yourself at all. :trollestia:

#407466 · 6w, 5d ago · · ·
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>>406332

The idea was to have an update very soon after I commented, but yes. The second one happened.

Planning on putting up the first chapter soon just to tantalise you all--anything further will have to wait some more.

...I'm making a really bad name for myself, aren't I? :unsuresweetie:

#406332 · 6w, 5d ago · · ·
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>>401344 Well what's keeping you? Writer's block? IRL Crap? Perhaps an update is nearing completion and you're waiting a few days to sic it on us?

#401344 · 7w, 1d ago · · ·
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>>401283

Funny you should say that.

#401283 · 7w, 1d ago · · ·
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AAAAAAAAAA!!! update! don't leave us in the dark! ...please...

#333869 · 13w, 9h ago · · ·
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one thing i saw weried in this story(hearts aflutter is the end they just go on the feild i think u should finnish flutter shys recovery to get her to fly and have some kind of really nice kissy ending up on the clouds were they started

#285640 · 17w, 2d ago · · ·
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>>285274

Huh, what's this? Fim...fiction? What's that agai- OH NOES!

Just kidding. I've been around, though also quite busy with the end of high school and a month long holiday with all the family over Christmas. Excuses, I know.

I have been working though. Re-Write of Hearts Aflutter's coming along nicely, though I don't really want to show any of it yet. In addition, a couple of one-shots and a nice little 30,000 word multi-chapter I'm just now starting on are in the works.

To sum up, it's sure been forever, but I'm not dead quite yet. I do apologise for the lack of presence though.

#285274 · 17w, 2d ago · 1 · ·
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Are you still doing anything on the site? It's been forever since you posted a story, a chapter or even a blog post.

#246378 · 21w, 2d ago · · ·
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>>243412

Sadly, Mr. Necron, I am in fact overwriting a lot of what is there. It's for sure good right now, but I just can't figure out how to end it, or even continue it, the way it is.

But don't worry - you'll like the re-write lots, lots more. That, or I'll do the cupcake AND seppuku.

#243412 · 21w, 4d ago · · ·
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Hay... just a question when you rewrite hearts aflutter .... your not gonna like... OVERWRITE the original...are you? :applecry::fluttercry::raritycry: cuz i think its good the way it is; well then again that's just my opinion.

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Quick heads-up for anyone who missed my last post - while ranting on and on about how much of a dick I am, I also said that I'll be re-writing Hearts Aflutter.

Another quick heads-up - some comments on this post are liable to contain SPOILERS! HOH MY GAWD, THE SPOILERS!

(I doubt anyone reading this hasn't read the story, but whatever.)

Now that that's out of the way, I'll begin. There are lots of things I don't like in Hearts Aflutter - there's a number of things I'm going to change, a couple of things I'm likely to remove entirely, and also one or two things that I'm going to keep no matter what. But I'll be frank - I've been writing this story for me, pretty much this whole time, and look where it's gotten me. I've decided to change that up a bit, and ask you guys for your honest opinions.

I want you all to tell me about Hearts Aflutter, and tell me all of the things you like, - all the parts you really want to stay, especially the parts you want to stay almost/entirely unchanged, and I'll see what I can do.

But also, and much, much more important (to me anyway) - I want your honest, brutal opinions on everything you don't like about Hearts Aflutter. Any scenes you hate? Hate 'em here.  

Example: Rainbow Dash hitting Fluttershy with the Sonic Rainboom. Out of all the places she could have hit in the entire sky, she happens to hit the pegasus who's about to ask her out? That is clearly a plot device, and also absolutely stupid. Gone. Bam. I'm changing the heck out of that, and there's nothing you can do to stop me.

Example 2: Rainbow Dash's suddenly eidetic memory. LOLPLOTDEVICE! Seriously, that's even worse than the Rainboom. What was I ever thinking? Seriously!

Do be brutal. Don't even worry too much about being constructive, I reckon. Some of the things in this story deserve to burn. As long as it's honest, I reckon I'll be able to use it when I re-write the story, and if all goes well it will be a LOT better for it.

- MS

P.S - Again, don't forget to check out the little snippet of the new Chapter 1 if you haven't already.

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