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Chapter 13 · 7:44am

As you may or may not know, I was on a long Hiatus after I took down Chapter 13 and the Epilogue of Lost Time, but I am proud to say that I am back. I have gone through Chapter 13 and cut or rewrote some parts, but then completely revised the last part of it. The ending is still in production, but it is actually going to be Chapter 14, and then the Epilogue which should finally conclude the story.

So now on to the important part. I am inviting a few people to come and pre-read Chapter 13 for me. Preferrably those who disliked the ending yet still kept me on their tracking list, but also a few who liked the ending as well.

The new ending isn't meant to specifically please anyone besides myself. I saw the error in the path my story took and I rewrote it in a way that I saw more fitting. I also completely omitted the Discord flashback (but not deleted; I intend to use it for a later side story.)

If you are interested in pre-reading it, please post in this blog and tell me if you disliked or liked the previous ending. I want to get this chapter out to you guys as soon as possible but not before I'm confident I didn't miss anything. It makes sense to me, but I want to make sure it makes sense to you.

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Lost Time

When Rarity is given an order for a dress, a series of unfortunate circumstances lead her to request the aid of Twilight Sparkle. When she discovers that Twilight has been studying time spells, she asks if she can help her recover some of her time. Reluctantly, Twilight agrees, but when she is performing her spell, something breaks her concentration causing the spell to become unstable, sending them 15 years into the future. What awaits them in a world where they have been missing for so long? Will they ever get back to their own time? Only time will tell.

*WARNING*

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#104316 · 39w, 5d ago · · ·
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your story rocks! when are you coming back from hiatus?

#92834 · 41w, 6d ago · · ·
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>>92650 it works now, when i did it b4 it gave me a blank doc

#92650 · 41w, 6d ago · · ·
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>>91863

I'm having no problem with it. Is it giving you an error or 404 or something?

#91863 · 42w, 15h ago · · ·
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The Links Didnt WORK:raritycry:

#67891 · 45w, 6d ago · · ·
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so when do u think u will finally release the nxt real chapter of lost time, cause i began reading it after u took away your original ending and the last part with (spoiler for the others looking) celestia real threw me thru the window.... i really hope to see the nxt chapter soon:twilightsmile:

#56670 · 48w, 1d ago · · ·
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You my friend, you are all kinds of awesome. I will be following you for more stories, cause you have a gift.:rainbowdetermined2:

#30855 · 52w, 6d ago · · ·
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>>30853 ... I... I don't know.

*gets shot it to the pit of death*

WAHAHAHAHAHAA!!!

#30853 · 52w, 6d ago · · ·
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>>30852

Wait, African or European?

#30852 · 52w, 6d ago · · ·
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>>30851 What is the air-speed velocity of an unladen swallow?

#30851 · 52w, 6d ago · · ·
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