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1ManJusticeLeague http://www.reddit.com/u/Little_Sally_Digby/ http://twitter.com/LittleSallyDigB
User ID: 9,697
Registered: 20th Jan 2012
Last Seen: 1d, 8h ago
Story views: 884

Hi there!

If you're reading this, you've probably just gone through a big old wall of text that I left lying around in the comments section of one of your stories. I do that a lot- particularly when a story really catches my interest. So congratulations!

So. Me. Me me me me me. What can I say about me? Well, in addition to wall-of-text comments, I've also produced a presentation on Equestria's cosmos, a couple of PMVs, some Magic cards, some artwork... and I'm currently prereading for CyborgSamurai's The Powers of Harmony and writing lyrics for Masterkid1230's Fountains of Pony Project. Our first song can be found here, and more are coming! Hopefully. One day. (On a more uplifting note, I've preread some other stories in the past, such as the wildly popular Pipsqueak's Day Out by Chuckfinley.)

So mostly I guess I dabble. I've recently concluded that I have the mind of a designer, rather than an artist- I'm much better at planning things out rather than actually following through and finishing them. Which reminds me- I have two different ideas for stories right now, though Celestia only knows when they might get written: Rediscovery, in which Spike wakes up in a world where the first Sonic Rainboom never happened and sets out to learn what's become of the world and how it can be fixed, if at all; and Everfree, a shorter story that nevertheless casts the Everfree Forest and a certain fan-favorite background pony in a whole new light. If you're curious and you like writing (like actual pen-and-paper/hands-and-keyboard writing) you might want to ask me about those; the whole 'designer' thing means I might end up needing a cowriter of my own.

I like Doctor Who, Terry Pratchett, Kim Possible, Neil Gaiman, the writings of Orson Scott Card, superheroes, both Avatar series (TLA and LOK), graphic literature, Diane Duane, certain anime, and probably a number of other things. I need to catch up on Fringe, among other things, but I'm currently working my way through Shadows in Flight and probably other stuff as well. The Legion of Super-Heroes is best superteam. Twilight Sparkle is best pony.

Somewhere along the line two twenty people decided to watch me even though I've barely written anything on this site. I'm surprised and impressed and I hope they don't end up regretting that decision.

So I was reading a story (Spike the Selfless, by flutterdash1) and one line in particular caught my eye. It's not a spoiler or anything, just a particular detail of the premise as stated in the description.

it was the Dragons who declared war and burnt Appleoosa to the ground.

And I read Family by NTSTS a long time ago and its characterization of Braeburn and his feelings about Appleloosa and what it means to him really stuck with me, so... this happened. It's not even five hundred words, but it's the most complete idea I've typed up in a while and I thought I should put it somewhere so that people who are interested in my writing can see it.


Braeburn's world was burning.

He'd been here when Appleloosa was founded. He hadn't helped with the first building, but he'd been here long before the town charter- before the salt pub or the orchard or even the train station. He'd have walked here on his own four hooves if he didn't have supplies to contribute- in the end he'd had to split the fare for a pegasus chariot with Red Delicious and Golden Delicious to get themselves and their provisions this far out in the desert. The twins hadn't stuck it out in the end; they'd decided they were needed back in Trottingham. But Braeburn had stayed. He'd grown up making annual visits to Ponyville to see Cousin Mac and Cousin AJ and Granny Smith, and always wanted to hear Granny's stories of the pioneer days, her parents staking their claim at the edge of the Everfree and working against all the odds, to make that patch of land something new, something worthwhile, something they could call home.

That was all he'd wanted. To make something worthwhile. To make something everypony would value. To be like Great-Grandpa Appleseed, striking out into the unknown and changing it with his own four hooves.

He hadn't let himself think about it until now. The fire had been spreading too fast and there were too many ponies who needed evacuating. It had gotten easier at some point- he'd looked around and seen others helping as well, and the work had gone faster after that- but he hadn't thought about that either, not until everypony was safe outside of town, away from the flames.

Now it was hitting him.

There weren't enough pegasi in Appleloosa to put together a weather brigade and try to quench the blaze, and even if there had been there wasn't a cloud in the sky. The orchard they'd worked so hard to plant had had to get by on earth pony magic alone- good healthy soil and love and hope. The orchard was burning too. By the morning there would be nothing here but ash.

"Braeburn?" Someone nudged him, gently, with a limb that was too small, more like being poked with a stick than patted by another pony.

He turned to look and saw one of the last faces he'd been expecting to see. "Strongheart? What're you doin'- I mean, it's not- ..." Words failed him. They rarely did, but it was that kind of night.

"We came when we saw the light from the fire," the young buffalo explained. "We thought that we could help, but it had spread too far and too fast, and it was all we could do to help the ponies who were trapped. Do you... do you think there is anything we can do?"

A tear welled up in his eye as he looked away from the flames, his uncertain expression meeting Strongheart's own. "I... I don't know."


... I can write characters who aren't in the Apple Family, too. :twilightsheepish: I swear!

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#397798 · 7w, 3d ago · · ·
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Please Follow Me, I Followed Ya

#240037 · 21w, 6d ago · · ·
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Just so you know, you are quite literally my favorite person in the world for leaving so many reviews on MLM. Seriously, I got the warm fuzzies when I saw how many comments you submitted.

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#147722 · 32w, 3d ago · · ·
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Hi there!

First of all, thanks for faving my story - it's nice to know that other people like what I've done.

Second of all... judging by the other posts on this page, you give long, detailed reviews.Could you could do something like that for my fanfic? If so, thanks!

#93702 · 40w, 6d ago · · ·
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>>93701

Ah, no problem at all, just checking it hadn't fubar'd again. Take as long as you need, you're doing something highly awesome for free, after all :pinkiehappy:

#93701 · 40w, 6d ago · · ·
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>>93696

Yes. Sunday was busy for me; I'll send you my reply later today.

#93696 · 40w, 6d ago · · ·
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Hey, me and this dude I'm prereading for were having some issues with Fimfic messages, I sent you some more of chapter 3 day before yesterday, did you recieve it?

#83400 · 42w, 4d ago · · ·
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Good job with all the comments. Almost every story I read and look at the comments your there. And you have a good perspective on these stories that help them improve.

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#73051 · 44w, 2d ago · · ·
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Hey thanks for the fav of Perspective:pinkiehappy:

And as to whether he remembers or not, I don't think he does, Spike is far to carefree to have that running around in his head. Ultimately though, I'd leave that up to the reader.

Glad you liked it.

#72066 · 44w, 3d ago · · ·
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Thanks for faving "Assassinate Princess Celestia" and for the in-depth critique.

#62003 · 46w, 3d ago · · ·
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Why can't there be more ponies like you, who are willing point out my grievous faults and shortcomings. It's ponies like you that make us strive to be better with in depth analysis instead of trolling or random praise.

Seriously tho, if you want to get in on prereading/editing my next project, I'd be more than honored for your input.

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