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Leo Archon 612279

Joined April 2012
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    Leo Archon's Stories (6)

    • Ponypuff Girls
      Lauren Faust's two biggest girls shows meet! Everpony wins!

      10,525 words · 7,084 views · 541 likes · 17 dislikes
    • Pony Fantasy IV
      Final Fantasy IV... with ponies! What else could you want?
      53,208 words · 2,216 views · 142 likes · 6 dislikes
    • Infernals
      Two ponies' dark pasts catch up to them. Drama ensues.
      18,153 words · 623 views · 51 likes · 4 dislikes
    • Turnabout Storm: The Case is Lost
      AU bad ending for the famous Phoenix Wright/MLP crossover; Not every bad ending is necessarily tragic.
      3,367 words · 535 views · 21 likes · 4 dislikes
    • Song of Change
      4,668 words · 291 views · 11 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Bridge to the Heart
      2,514 words · 305 views · 9 likes · 15 dislikes
    Feb
    19th
    2013

    Okay, time to review.

    "Crystal Empire" was a good two-parter. I have one major gripe about it, though: Sombra. He just wasn't that interesting a villain, especially compared to previous baddies like Nightmare Moon, Discord, and Chrysalis. Aside from that, the introduction of the Crystal Empire was well-worth the wait.

    "Too Many Pinkie Pies" was alright. Pinkie's breakdown regarding whether or not she was real really hit me in the feels. Still, Twilight, as observant as she is, should have remembered that Pinkie is emotionally fragile at times, and should have picked the real Pinkie out early. It would have saved a LOT of trouble. On the other hoof, that would have been a boring resolution.

    "One Bad Apple" was excellent. CMC episodes usually make me wary, but this one was worth it. Babs is an excellent foil to both the CMC and the RBD (Rich Brat Duo). On the one hoof, she's a blank flank, and has been teased about it. On the other hoof, she has a Manehattenite attitude towards things. In the end, she gave the RBD what-for. Also, the song "Bad Seed" is an instant ear-worm, and I love it.

    "Magic Duel" was awesome! Trixie returns triumphant, figuratively and literally! The fact that she out-powered Twilight, who's widely regarded as one of the (if not the) most powerful mage in Equestria, really added to the shock value, and it made the episode spectacular. And to be defeated by smoke-and-mirrors, her old schtick, was a nice touch of irony.

    "Sleepless in Ponyville" was a heartfelt episode. Scootaloo suffers from something we all do in the presence of our idols: the need to impress. In the end, she had to admit her fears, only to learn that she and Rainbow Dash aren't so different. A very well-written episode. And it has Luna for added joy.

    "Wonderbolts Academy" is another awesome episode. Rainbow Dash has taken her first step towards realizing her dream of becoming a Wonderbolt, but she's not willing to put her dream above her friends' well-being. Lightning Dust is an interesting character, a look at Rainbow Dash minus her virtues. And Rainbow doesn't really like what she sees below the surface.

    "Apple Family Reunion" is a great episode, for being centered on AJ, my favorite pony. Though, it seems that in this particular episode, she's decided to borrow a leaf (or twelve) from Twilight's book: Overpreparedness 101. The return of Babs Seed (as well as Braeburn and Apple Strudel in view only) was welcome, as was the lesson AJ learned at the end. Some criticize this and other AJ episodes for being too similar. Still, I like AJ, and I like this episode. Also, more great music in the form of "Raise This Barn".

    "Spike at Your Service" was bad. The main failing I have with it is Spike's obseqiuousness towards AJ. Spike is many things, but he's not that devoted to being a servant. He has his own wants and dreams. Also, the 'life-debt' thing? Pretty obviously borrowed from Star Wars. And I refuse to believe that Spike is so clumsy he makes a mess wherever he goes. Hay, he takes care of the library no problem, which is full of flammable books.

    "Keep Calm and Flutter On" was a load of horseapples. Reforming Discord is an interesting concept, but this episode botched it severely. One friend was all it took? Really, Hasbro? I understand this is a show for little girls, but that's stretching the suspension of disbelief. John de Lancie's talent was wasted on this.

    "Just for Sidekicks" was another bad apple. Not to rag on Spike, but... this season really doesn't like him. He's apparently forgotten the lesson he learned in "Secret to My Excess", which is a real pain. Hay, Zecora even alludes to it by donating one of his gems to charity, telling him dragon's greed is bad mojo. Speaking of, this is, to my knowledge, Zecora's only appearance throughout Season 3. Why is that, I wonder?

    "Games Ponies Play" is the companion episode to "Just For Sidekicks", and is a much better episode in general. True, the whole plot could have been avoided had the girls simply asked to confirm identities, but everything worked out in the end. What I like is that this situation is a very real possibility in real life, too. In fact, I'm pretty sure this has happened before...

    Last, "Magical Mystery Cure". Oh, boy. For a season finale, this was... I won't say bad, but it was quite obviously rushed, especially the part dealing with Twilight's ascension and coronation. The first part of the episode was very well-done, and I like how proactive Twilight is regarding helping her friends. But when she's done, and finishes Starswirl's spell, that's when things go downhill. There was enough potential in this to easily be a two-parter, and I hate the fact that this season's length caused it to be a single episode.

    Overall, the season was rather good, with a few hiccups towards the end. In my firm opinion, "Keep Calm and Flutter On" should have been removed from the roster, and "Magical Mystery Cure" should have been a two-parter. Still, though, this was a vast improvement on some of Season 2's content *cough*Maredowell*cough*.

    I apologize for the rant, but I just rewatched the whole season today with my sister, and had to get this out of my system.

    Leo Archon · 120 views
    Jan
    16th
    2013

    About the delay... · 3:33am

    Those of you who follow me and my stories (all two of you) may be wondering what the buck is taking me so long to update Pony Fantasy IV and Infernals. Well, my reasons are twofold:

    1. I've commissioned some new title cards for the fics in question, so they'll look fresh and new.

    2. More importanly, my muses have taken leave of me.

    Seriously, I've been in a creative slump recently in terms of writing (those of you who follow my Tumblr may have noticed it's updated a few times since the storyline started, but not often). Hopefully, the new title cards will renew my creativity, and I'll be able to update both fics regularly from now on.

    Note that, while I could have Dirty Bit contribute to the next chapter of Infernals, he did the lion's share of work on Chapters 2 and 3, so I feel obligated to do most of the work on 4 (which has been posted) and 5 (which is in the works). Afterwards, we'll see how things go.

    Also, a notice: Until one of these fanfics is finished, I am not taking any of my other fics off hiatus, including Ponypuff Girls. I apologize for the delays.

    Leo Archon · 85 views
    Nov
    29th
    2012

    Tumblr now active! · 12:36am

    Until recently, my Tumblr account was little more than an excuse to ask non-anonymous questions to various blogs. No longer, though!

    I now have an actual storyline beginning, and I'd like you, my faithful readers, to support me!

    Leo Archon's Multiversal Mishaps

    Leo Archon · 34 views
    Oct
    4th
    2012

    A Quick Note · 8:38am

    Those of you who pay close attention may note that I've just put three of my four fics on hiatus. I have my reasons for doing this.

    Pony Fantasy IV is my current 'pet' project. I want to work on it exclusively for the time being. This means that there probably won't be updates to the other three for a while.

    I know, I know. You're all yelling at me about Ponypuff Girls. Well, the thing is, I've hit a bit of a block regarding where I want the story to go. Worry not, I do plan on continuing it eventually. For now, though, PFIV is taking exclusive priority over all else.

    Leo Archon · 42 views
    Sep
    17th
    2012

    Help Requested · 6:06pm

    For some time, now, I've been adding chapters to an interactive on Writing.com. What's this interactive?

    It's called 'Nyx: The Teen Years'.

    The thing is, the only people who seem to really be contributing to this are myself and the creator of the interactive. This is a bit disappointing, especially since there's a section of the interactive almost exclusively reserved for crossovers with other fics.

    So, I'm appealing to my loyal fanbase: Check it out, and add chapters, if you like.

    Leo Archon · 27 views
    Sep
    16th
    2012

    Well, mere days after my grandmother's passing, I'm now officially one year older.

    The timing is a bit sickening, honestly, but I'm not going to let that stop me from enjoying myself.

    So, happy birthday to me!

    Leo Archon · 37 views
    Sep
    12th
    2012

    A Day of Tragedy · 9:03pm

    Earlier today, my grandmother passed away peacefully. Several things went wrong with her body, all at the same time. She was old, and beloved by many.

    I appreciate all of you who offered your prayers for her. This is going to be difficult for me.

    Suffice to say, any creative ideas I may have had have been laid to the wayside in the wake of this tragedy. However, I continue to ask your support as I go through a radical change in my life.

    Leo Archon · 38 views
    Sep
    11th
    2012

    Celestia, Hear Me · 5:42pm

    My grandmother is in critical condition in the hospital ER. I realize I posted something similar to this a couple of months ago, but her condition has worsened.

    Everyone, I ask you to keep my grandmother in your prayers. She's been my closest family member for a couple of years now, and she means the world to me.

    Leo Archon · 24 views
    Jul
    7th
    2012

    Apologies · 6:13pm

    I know it's been a couple of months since I've done anything to my stories. Unfortunately, I have my reasons. I live with my grandmother, and she has been very unwell recently. She's been to the hospital ER once already, and we're going again later today. With any luck, she'll recover like the last time this happened to her 5 years ago.

    Anyway, as a little update notice, I'm 7 pages in the next Ponypuff Girls chapter. I haven't started my next Pony Fantasy IV, though I've got a good idea as to what will happen. Hopefully, I'll get those out soon. Writer's block plus real life troubles is a pain.

    Leo Archon · 29 views
    Jun
    8th
    2012

    Just a reassurance to all my loyal viewers that I am diligently working on the new chapters of Ponypuff Girls and Pony Fantasy IV. I hit a patch of writer's block, but I'm pushing through it.

    In the meantime, have a picture of Celestia, Luna, and Lauren!

    Leo Archon · 24 views