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Kitsunin 234

Joined November 2011
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    Kitsunin's Stories (2)

    • Celestia's Trust
      Tensions rise between the princesses as Celestia does not allow Luna to resume co-ruling Equestria

      8,250 words · 4,597 views · 100 likes · 13 dislikes
    • Bearer of Misfortune
      Discord retells the story of his life, from when he was a colt to the present.
      5,987 words · 1,045 views · 31 likes · 3 dislikes
    Dec
    13th
    2011

    Well would you look at me, stealing all your times with my crazy antics, releasing all three of the final chapters in one day.

    Ah, it feels so good to have finally finished a project like this.  This is seriously not only my first time allowing a piece of fiction to be judged by anyone (I suppose my parents sort of judged-ish a mediocre novel I started writing when I was 13.) But actually now my first ever completed piece of fiction, with two others (Not fanfiction) I started and didn't finish.

    So...the question now is, what's next?

    Well, there are two things I have plans to do:  

    Number one is an alternate gag ending to Celestia's Trust, now this may or may not be released, since I honestly have no clue whether I'll be able to make something funny, as I've never tried it before.

    Number two is 'Bearer of Misfortune' which will be Discord's telling of his life's story.  I really think if I can live up to even half the potential the ideas I have for this contain, it will be amazing.

    And that's pretty much it for now.  

    I also wish to say I've recently played 'To The Moon' and good god is that game amazing.  If I can ever create a story that comes close to the emotional impact that game has, I will feel fulfilled.

    Kitsunin · 32 views
    Dec
    11th
    2011

    Brief update · 2:29pm

    I recently got an idea, and I'm going to be doing something a bit interesting with Celestia's Trust.  It shall involve a bit more writing after it is finished, that's the hint I'm giving as to what it will be.

    Aside from that, I want to say thank you to TheWattsMan, who is now pre-reading for me.  Also to say that even though in actuality it's pretty easy, it feels stressful to be giving myself the deadline of one chapter per day.  Guess it's best to get used to deadlines now than wait until I have to deal with ones that aren't self-imposed.

    Kitsunin · 7 views
    Dec
    9th
    2011

    I'd like to say that the reception I've gotten for Celestia's Trust is SO much better than I had hoped, I mean, 4.6 out of 5?  I don't deserve that, seriously.  Not that I'm not happy, neigh (lolponypun) ecstatic about it.

    So here's my plan, indefinitely, I'm going to be publishing one new chapter per day, if I had to guess, I'd say that this will probably last until I'm done with my second fanfiction.  No promises though.

    My next fanfiction will be an origin story of sorts for Discord, more details later on, but it's going to be much darker/more serious than Celestia's Trust.

    Finally, if anyone would like, I could use people to beta-read new chapters, I don't need any, but it would certainly help me to, for example, have gotten that big edit I made to the first chapter of Celestia's Trust done before publishing it.  Basically, anyone who's willing to read stuff that I've finished writing and editing, and point out any grammar and style errors (There probably won't be many, I'm pretty OCD with my writing) as well as just opinions on like, if I'm getting the characters right, if any things don't make sense, you know.  It would be very much appreciated, and you could read the stuff a bit before it's out, in just about the condition it's going to be released in (Probably).  Well, without anyone beta-reading I can keep going on as I have been, which should be fine, it would just be nice.  If you want to do it, send me a message and I can give you the urls to read the stuff as I become ready to have it pre-read.

    Also, I know I probably don't have enough of a following to be posting stuff like this, but I don't give a darn.

    Kitsunin · 14 views