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Or so I hope, Csquared08 has proven me wrong in the past.

Anyhow, it's time to step back and look at the forest rather than just the trees. Twilight and company have been the primary focus of the story until now and, save honorable mentions, our esteemed Princess of the Night has been entirely absent from the story. What has she been up to, and why hasn't she returned to Equestria? Chapter 24 aims to resolve that persistent query, as well as to give you a snapshot of the state of the World outside Equestria as a result of the conspiracy. Look forward to it.

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Forsaken

As the princess's protégé and one of Ponyville's most well-known and influential ponies, Twilight Sparkle has always enjoyed a comfortable life. Together with her friends she has battled and triumphed over dark ponies, dragons, and mischievous spirits. But what happens when her friends desert her and she finds herself hunted by her very mentor after she is wrongfully accused of an attempt on her life? Will she be able to overcome the desertion of her life-long friends? Will she be able to bear the burden of being an outcast? And more importantly, can she unmask the pony behind these acts before they get away with the Princess's murder? It's a race against time to find the culprit before Twilight herself gets caught and subjected to justice in this suspense and pony filled story!

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Heaven is not for morons

When The Great and Powerful Trixie stumbles across an old book riddled with forbidden magic she decides to use it to exact her revenge on Twilight. After weeks of careful preparation she conducts a ritual to summon what the book describes as "the legendary beasts of chaos and destruction". Unfortunately for the young unicorn not all things go as planned as these mysterious specimens aren't too keen on following her orders, nor does she understand the true nature of their abilities.

What is she to do now? How can she tame these horrifying beasts? Will she ever achieve her revenge and rise back to stardom? More importantly: what exactly are a "lawyer" and an "accountant" and how does she go about unlocking their "latent powers"?

Rated teen for mild use of coarse language.

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#444528 · 3w, 4d ago · · ·
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Last Seen: 15w, 2d ago

I have a sad now...

#312365 · 14w, 5d ago · · ·
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Hello sir or madame,

I am Obsidian Raindrop the creator of a group known as The Great and Not Obsessive Trixie   I am here to ask if you would like your story to be added to my group.

The only requirements are:

1. You have a story about Trixie and she is not completely obsessing over her lose at the hands of Twilight. (She can hate that she lost to twilight and even try and beat again but she just can't be be so obsessive like she is in most stories. )

2.  She may be a supporting character or a main character it does not matter.

3. i can`t think of a third thing

It's me Osidian again asking you guys to do stuff you don't want to.

1. tell me the name of your story and the one folder you want it in

2. join the group it is really cool and we'll soon get a banner up

3. fallow because it will boost my confidence

Sorry to all those who either received this email twice or who don`t have trixie as a main or supporting character. Also just PM me if you want your story added.

Yours truly, Obsidian Raindrop

#276813 · 17w, 6d ago · · ·
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Hey, you, are we ever gonna get an update? :pinkiehappy:

~ Csquared08, The Shameless Nag

#180704 · 27w, 4d ago · · ·
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>>180696

Advanced style of writing and advanced style of explaining stuff. I like it. Well, I wish you luck on your papers (or whatever) and take your time. Don't stress out, waiting is not as bad as getting shit stuff. Just a simple "I'm studying please don't hate me" would of been fine. We all completely understand.

Hope to see you again soon.

#180696 · 27w, 4d ago · · ·
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>>180635 Sorry bro, got finals coming up and then a paper to write for contracts. Though that's not the only reason for the lack of updates,

I assure you. Initially I intended to just rewrite the first eight chapters but I've noticed I kinda skipped over a couple of points in my outline. Now, I could just add all that information in some sort of flashback but that would actually be resorting to Deux ex Machina and be a complete ass-pull.

So what I'm doing right now is working on those missing chapters that are to be inserted right at the beginning of the story. This means that the story will no longer start at "Hunted" rather that will become the new chapter four or five, depending on how I actually manage to play out the outline.

Because we're not talking about a single chapter that means I can't just add them one at a time and not expect to completely confuse the hell out of everybody: they have to be added all at once. So this is where it all stands right now:

Chapter one "Catastrophe" - Finished

Chapter two "unnamed" - Finished

Chapter three "unnamed" - pending

Chapter four "Fallout" - pending

Naturally I'm working towards getting those done, but as I said I'm approaching finals and law is not an easy career so I don't have that much free time. I actually spent the last two weekends doing nothing but writing and I intend to do the same on the one coming up, maybe even as early as Thursday (I love the story as much as you do so I don't see it as a duty or some pain in the ass work I have to get done).

Now, the reason I've kept my silence is because so far I've put up two author notes and to put up a third would really be pushing it. Rather than sit down and explain why I'm taking so long I would prefer to actually sit down and write. I don't want to be a tease and keep telling my readers "almost there!", partly because of the sexual innuendo but mostly because it's tasteless.

I sincerely appreciate your concern and I don't take it as insulting or anything like that, rather I think it speaks volumes of how much you actually like the story. I also think highly of my followers and so I will honor this and any other questions you have with the appropriate response.

As of December the 9th I expect my writing to speed up considerably (don't worry, I'm not saying that's when I'll post the new chapters. I certainly hope to get it done long before then), as that's the date when my finals end and I go out on break. Until then I'll try and keep up with whatever circumstances throw at me and make sure it doesn't hinder my work.

#180635 · 27w, 4d ago · · ·
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Hey, no offence, but where the hell are you? I understand that you were going to rewrite some of the story but it's been a WHOLE MONTH without a single word... If your taking a break that yea, fair enough, but don't lose your fans. WE MISS YOU!!!

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