It's an interesting take on the Sad Luna fics, of which there are many (moreso back during season 1).
I like that it discusses Luna's perspective and thoughts without dissolving into absolute despair; something I've want to read for a while now. I like how it addresses Luna's emotions, especially in a world where, if she were to show negative emotion, only the worst would be assumed, and so she sees a therapist. I like that.
I'm hoping that even though it's a sad fic, it ends on a high note. Mostly because I'd like to see how Sleepless in Ponyville is brought into the fic, and I imagine it would make her happy, considering it gives her a stronger purpose again.
I do find it strange when Luna repeats the question she was asked. I know the writing style is what it is, but it still seems like a choice that only exists because you went with that writing style. Why not write it conventionally? Third person, with description and fleshing out the therapist?
But it's a minor point, and I wouldn't change it now after two chapters.
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No problem, it was a brilliant fic!
And you too, happy holidays!
Hello, hello! Thanks for reading and faving Our Gifts! I hope you have a great holiday season!
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No problem.
It's an interesting take on the Sad Luna fics, of which there are many (moreso back during season 1).
I like that it discusses Luna's perspective and thoughts without dissolving into absolute despair; something I've want to read for a while now. I like how it addresses Luna's emotions, especially in a world where, if she were to show negative emotion, only the worst would be assumed, and so she sees a therapist. I like that.
I'm hoping that even though it's a sad fic, it ends on a high note. Mostly because I'd like to see how Sleepless in Ponyville is brought into the fic, and I imagine it would make her happy, considering it gives her a stronger purpose again.
I do find it strange when Luna repeats the question she was asked. I know the writing style is what it is, but it still seems like a choice that only exists because you went with that writing style. Why not write it conventionally? Third person, with description and fleshing out the therapist?
But it's a minor point, and I wouldn't change it now after two chapters.
I look forward to reading more.
Thank you for the favorite on Therapist Visit! If I may ask, what did you like about the story that made you favorite it?