Edits R2 · 11:34pm
So, I finally got around to doing what I meant to do last monday, but work got in the way.
Flight 19 is now fully edited up to chapter 10, which is where the significant leap in quality happened. Tada.
Anyway, changelog includes:
Less out of place humour.
Less pointless nods for the sake of pointless nods.
Less 'Celestia's OOC', cause let's be honest, she was a total cunt. She has now been evaluated as 'just a normal bitch'.
More militarized. With my job now being military, I can finally look back and go 'this would never happen' or 'this should have gone this way'.
Spelling, Grammar, etc.
Stivers' and Sword's dialogue have been synced with their personalities later in the story.
No specific chapter really needs rereading as no content was significantly altered by any stretch, but hey, I wont stop you from rereading the story