Goldenarbiter

Joined November 2011
147 followers
4,815 story views
5h, 35m ago

Pte GA, Canadian Forces. Currently stationed at CFSCE Kingston. Small time writer, most projects on hold however, due to military training. Always willing to talk via PM, email, or skype.

The stories I have written

  • Flight 19 Flight 19 disappears and ends up in an unfamiliar country filled with unfamiliar people. Or ponies. by Goldenarbiter 180,049 words · 4,353 views · 480 likes · 23 dislikes
  • The Fallen The story of a fallen angel as he finds his place amongst Equestria. by Goldenarbiter 4,113 words · 462 views · 27 likes · 3 dislikes
Apr
16th
2014

Edits R2 · 11:34pm

So, I finally got around to doing what I meant to do last monday, but work got in the way.

Flight 19 is now fully edited up to chapter 10, which is where the significant leap in quality happened. Tada.

Anyway, changelog includes:

Less out of place humour.

Less pointless nods for the sake of pointless nods.

Less 'Celestia's OOC', cause let's be honest, she was a total cunt. She has now been evaluated as 'just a normal bitch'.

More militarized. With my job now being military, I can finally look back and go 'this would never happen' or 'this should have gone this way'.

Spelling, Grammar, etc.

Stivers' and Sword's dialogue have been synced with their personalities later in the story.

No specific chapter really needs rereading as no content was significantly altered by any stretch, but hey, I wont stop you from rereading the story :pinkiesmile:

Goldenarbiter · 16 views · Report · Story: Flight 19

Stories that deserve a place in everyone's minds.

  • Our First Steps A tale of the Equestrian Space Programme, in the style of 50s science fiction novels. Poyekhali! by Mrakoplaz 197,232 words · 1,537 views · 233 likes · 3 dislikes
  • Friendship Is Optimal: Caelum Est Conterrens Set in the Optimalverse, a middle-aged woman confronts what emigration to Equestria - uploading to a virtual existence - really means. But can she truly understand - and more importantly, should she trust the artificial intelligence Celestia? by Chatoyance 56,801 words · 7,274 views · 439 likes · 106 dislikes
  • Abandoned Memories (2nd Person POV) Your memory is littered with gaps, with just the sole memory of a traumatic event. by Malevolent Mika 106,391 words · 8,570 views · 640 likes · 22 dislikes

Comments

#1062126 · 4w, 18m ago · · ·

You do my pride a kindness by adding Zig Zag Love to your favorites! Follow me also! It inspires me to quicken my quill! :twilightsmile:

#956743 · 12w, 3h ago · · ·

>>956741 Oh yah, no problem. I swear I'll read it eventually :twilightsheepish:

#956741 · 12w, 3h ago · · ·

Thanks for the fave on Viva Las Pegasus!

#913033 · 15w, 1d ago · · ·

>>912333 No problem mate, same to you and yours.

#912333 · 15w, 2d ago · · ·

Golden,

Happy new year, friend. May 2014 bring you brighter futures, and may your life be full of joy and merriment.

Truly,

Travis J.

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