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Well, my proofreader has compiled a whopping SEVENTEEN PAGES of annotations regarding Chapter 1 of Division, and he's going to share tonight. Hoo boy. After tonight, lets see if my character-judging skills are up to snuff. Anyway, expect revisions to Chapter 1, particularly in the mirror scene, and then I can FINALLY get cracking on Chapter 2.

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Division

A mysterious group claiming to serve one of the two Royal Sisters appears in Equestria, though from the outset its intentions are clearly less than noble.  Their attacks ring across Equestria and shake the foundations of the millennia-old government, while Celestia and Luna claim no connection to this group whatsoever.  If this is true, who is pulling the strings? The Princesses and the Mane 6 must race to uncover the truth, while clouds of ash rise on the horizon and a larger deception threatens to tear the Sisters, and Equestria, apart.


My first fiction. DONT BE GENTLE. I need to know how well I'm doing, because this story is so awesome in my head and I want you guys to experience it the same way I do!

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Thanks for joining Rookies on the Rise Griffon! Keep being awesome!

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