Horseapples is about to go down · 6:39pm
Well, my proofreader has compiled a whopping SEVENTEEN PAGES of annotations regarding Chapter 1 of Division, and he's going to share tonight. Hoo boy. After tonight, lets see if my character-judging skills are up to snuff. Anyway, expect revisions to Chapter 1, particularly in the mirror scene, and then I can FINALLY get cracking on Chapter 2.