Chapter Followup: 5th and 6th · 1:48am
Well I've finally finished the story. I have decided that since the description of what happens in the story changes drastically after Luna returns, I will make separate stories.
Chapter 5 is simply about the events that happen in the Everfree Forest that we see in the show, only through Sil's eyes. It was kind of difficult because I had to keep reminding myself that Sil knew nothing about Pinkie Pie, Rarity, and Fluttershy, since he never learned their names, or saw much of Twilight's interactions with them. I thought it a good idea to introduce Zecora into the story, if only to provide an explanation for myself as to why she lives in the Everfree forest and not in Ponyville or with other zebras. Also, I really wanted to try my hand at her rhyming scheme.
I debated on whether to call this an Epilogue or an actual chapter, but since I'm making more than one story about Sil, I decided to go ahead and save the Epilogue (I have one planned) for the final story. But I called it Revelations because it was my opportunity to answer a lot of the questions that I may have brought up and left unanswered until now. I also noticed that I have created this story very quickly, and would like to know from anybody who read it and happens to read this as well if it felt rushed or what I can do to improve for my next fanfic.
The next installment will be about the antagonists of the first season, as well as developing Sil's relationships with everypony now that he's not really following Twilight but instead running security for the Elements of Harmony. Thank you for reading this story, and I hope I can continue to improve my writing skill, because I love to write and it would be nice to be good at it.