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Right in the feelz · 3:46am
I don't care if this is ever read or not, but i have to say something. My friend recently introduced me to a wonderful thing. This thing, is "Katawa Shoujo." To put it simply, the title translates to "Disability Girls."
I don't want to describe the entire game, but i will say this.... It and MLD are the only 2 things in the past year that made me cry... or cry such a high amount at least.
I strongly consider reading up on the game and giving it a shot, if you have any questions (if you actually read this) feel free to ask.
Find the game download HERE . Also, it has some 18+ content that can be disabled, but it is very minor.
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http://www.fimfiction.net/story/21686/Discordant
This is a pretty good story. It has incredible character development. Something you might wanna take some notes on.
>>139465 Not every Alicorn fic is bad. My first was an Alicorn fic, and it did surprisingly well. A ratio of 40u/3d (u=up d=down).
You just have to know what you're doing to pull it off. I mean, I don't personally like it, but others do.
>>139465 i will be sure to take your advice into consideration, im probably gonna scrap the whole thing, maybe leave it up as a reminder as what shit it was, but still, thanks for the advice
Ok, Hi. I see you're new here, and you've written your first fic. Now, I have to give you some advice.
ONE: You're first fic will be the worst fic. Take me, for exemple. I was writing a GOD AWFUL fic called Ponymon: Equestrian Adventures. It was so awful because the characters were dramaticly out of character! Ash started to notice Fluttershy as a crush (kinda), Fluttershy wasn't as shy as she should have been and Gary was evil, and then he stopped being a dicknub. You can see where i went wrong.
Luna was a lot more out of character then she should have been in your story, and an Alicorn OC? *Yawn*
2: You were doing the same thing everyone else does. You're beating a dead horse.
3: Maybe you should read more fanfics: It will help you better understand the importance of character development.