What's wrong? · 3:40pm
My story is rated 1.4 right now, and I want to know why. Did I do something wrong? If so, what did I do wrong? Or are there just a lot of trolls? Please tell me and do not be vague!
Floris · 27 views
My story is rated 1.4 right now, and I want to know why. Did I do something wrong? If so, what did I do wrong? Or are there just a lot of trolls? Please tell me and do not be vague!
Floris (me) lives his boring life until a portal appears. He however, takes it a little different. He starts experimenting with it and asks questions, before entering, to make sure it is what he has always dreamed of...
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Yes, this is a self-insert HiE fic. I'm looking for a pre-reader (English is my second language). Update: I'm already planning on some stuff that involves a party, some pain, the sound barrier and... Pokémon! Prepare for adventure!