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Needed Disclaimer · 11:22am

So, a friend finally put me up to this because I have no idea when I'll ever get to finishing Deep Dark or rewriting WCHB, so here it is. This is a disclaimer I've been meaning to do since several people who read my things have asked.

What Could Have Been was thought up during Season 1, and written during the summer, months before After That Fateful Night. It earned a Star 6 on Equestria Daily along with my second story on the site, Solar Flare. During the time, however, I was suffering from writer's block, and it ended up being a short story instead of the lengthy story I wanted. So much of it was left out that I wrote down a few supplementaries to go along with it. Most people didn't get to see them. Those that did were followers of mine from one of Equestria Daily's Ponychat's channels, EquestrianStudy. They also got to hear me constantly talking about it, so it wasn't something I kept quiet about. I eventually deleted the supplementals because I didn't need them anymore. But the chat still got to hear about my stories.

Months after I wrote WCHB, I made plans to rewrite it, but I was caught up in Deep Dark at the time. So I put it off, and put it off, and put it off. But I still remembered everything it was supposed to be, as did many of my readers from the channel. My readers point out a new story to me on EqD that involved Nightmare Moon and Twilight, just like mine. So we all read it with excitement, and then call BS in the comments. It was a blatant ripoff of mine. It never updated on EqD again. Sometimes I think it may have been After That Fateful Night, because when I read it, things seemed familiar, like I had read the first couple chapters before.

Time passes, and I finally upload all three of my Haven stories to FiMFiction. They don't get much notice, but oh well, I had them on EqD, Solar Flare was a relatively well known Star 6 (Though I wish it was more well known than that.) I thought nothing of it. Eventually, I go looking for Nightmare Moon and Twilight fics, since I loved their interaction. I come upon After That Fateful Night. Oh, hey! Another one where NMM took Twilight as a pet when she won! Cool! I begin reading it and start noticing various things. How many of the things that happened early on had also happened in my fic. At first, I thought it was a simple coincidence. A couple things? Yeah, that's fine. Then it happened again, and again, and continuously. Then I knew it was outright plagiarism. Not fully enough so that it can be taken straight from my story, but changed enough to be 'original'. The horn inhibitor, the way NMM transported Twilight. The rebellion (Which in my supplemental was started by Applejack), the War (Which I never revealed who was against. I was never sure myself. I thought I would just come up with something when I got to that part). Just various things that struck me. The way Twilight eventually came to love Nightmare Moon (Not in the stupid way that AtFN did, though. That was just bad) was different, though. In mine it was supposed to be more gradual. Not a desperate "OMG I've been abandoned she's the only one that loves me" crap.

So I confronted the 'author' (I use author as a loose term. Plagiarists aren't authors) about it. Of course, they vehemently denied it, but I could tell he was lying through his teeth. He eventually blocked me. Then he and his editor both came and thumbed down WCHB.

Eventually, if I do ever get to rewriting What Could Have Been, it'll have a better title and will be the majestic lengthy story I wanted it to be. And sitting right at the top will be a massive disclaimer pointing out that AtFN was built on plagiarized elements.

Dragryphon · 73 views · Edited 22w, 2d ago

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Deep Dark

A new threat has appeared in Equestria, one that has Deep ties to the past, and knows many Dark secrets. What the Princesses Celestia and Luna may find could reveal more to them about their ancestors than they wish to know. And what Twilight and her friends may discover of their rulers could shake the foundations Equestria was built upon.

The third story in my Haven Trilogy, designed to be longer in length with shorter chapters. Editors are switched partway through.

http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/06/story-solar-flare.html

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What Could Have Been

What could have happened if Nightmare Moon had won over Twilight Sparkle and her friends? The tome Princess Celestia gives Twilight explains what she saw while using a spell. It shows a new threat to Equestria, as well, and Princess Celestia said this story has no happy ending.

Story Two of the Haven Trilogy, a partial sequel to Solar Flare concerning the second tome Twilight Sparkle received. I don't feel this is close to the best I could do, considering that when this was written, I was suffering from an immense case of Writer's Block.

http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/06/story-solar-flare.html

SOON TO BE REWRITTEN

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Solar Flare

The War of the Night, an event so hushed up that only small legends left behind tell of the time it occurred. A discovered tome, however, reveals the history of the war, of the ruling sisters, and some things best left forgotten. Some things the two ruling sisters would prefer to remain hidden...

Finally posting this from Equestria Daily, where it earned a Star 6. This is the first story in the Haven Trilogy.

http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/06/story-solar-flare.html (Which at last count, has been Star Bombed by parasprites four times now.)

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#194048 · 26w, 6d ago · · ·
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Hey, Just wanted you to know that i really enjoyed deep dark, solar flare, and what could have been. Kinda sad to see this story go, but i have always preached "Do what you love, and when you don't love what you do, don't do it. if you are excited for your work, that is reflected and shines through your art. If you despise your work, that too is evident in your work. You should never have to force yourself to do work." Just know that even though i came for your solar flare storyline, I'm staying for your superb writing. Just know that if you want to     continue writing the solar flare storyline, I would be fully on board, also know that you do have people that really admire the story,  and admire you. In fact, I would say the eribus trilogy is my #1 favorite MLP story, above Fallout: Equestria, On a Cross And Arrow, and My Little Dashie, and that's saying alot. I remember always looking forward to the next time you would update, and I would read the chapter with incredible voracity. Anyway, this comment has gone on for far too long, and just would like to know I support you 100% on whatever direction you decide to take.

#130763 · 35w, 4d ago · · ·
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>>83477 Happy B-day NMM :pinkiehappy: :heart:

#83477 · 43w, 1d ago · · ·
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>>83450

Probably not. I find Warmth to be a badly done fic with many flaws. I can barely read it, myself. I've come a long way since my first fic. It'd been years since I last wrote, and I was extremely out of practice. I feel how I write now is a massive improvement.

#83450 · 43w, 1d ago · · ·
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Will "Warmth for the Night" be added here?

#55628 · 48w, 1d ago · · ·
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>>55624 Ah, I see.

#55624 · 48w, 1d ago · · ·
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>>55623

Actually, it was on EqD first and all three are under the Star 6 tag. It's just that Sethisto has yet to add my FiMfiction links to the post.

#55623 · 48w, 1d ago · · ·
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You should submit the fimfiction link to EqD I think this will get you more views and perhaps a feature.

#40810 · 50w, 6d ago · · ·
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>>40423

Heh, I don't do the whole tag thing, actually. XD

But, yes! Luna was the pony I first started reading about when I started reading fanfiction.

#40423 · 50w, 6d ago · · ·
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Sorry, but , You've been tagged!

And I'm a Luna Lover too.

I actually

stay up at night to read. No time for reading in the day.Well, excessive reading.

Edit: You're lucky. I can't put in the official tagging thing. So I guess I have to find someone else to tag.

#3703 · 61w, 1d ago · · ·
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>>3674

Of course! Luna and Nightmare Moon ARE the best ponies. Followed by Twilight Sparkle. (Who also is Best Pet, Rainbow Dash doesn't know what she was missing out on.)

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