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Rainbow

My name is, well, I can barely even remember. I think it was Terry. However, that isn't important. I have, what you could call, an "obsession" with Rainbow Dash. No, not THAT kind of obsession.

I wanted her to appear in our world so bad, so bad that I fell into insanity and delusions. I pushed all my friends, family, and everyone away chasing this dream of having her appear and letting me fly with her. Even now, on my deathbed in the hospital, I still have faith that she'll appear...

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This story is based off the song by Koroshi-Ya under the same name. I recommend listening to it first, otherwise you may be lost. It picks up during and after the last verse. My first fanfic, well, ever, so I decided to base it off something that inspired me personally. Constructive criticism is always welcome in comments, and I'll do my best to reply to each and every one!

Also, please forgive issues with formatting and such. I imported this from Google Docs, so it isn't perfect.

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#83630 · 43w, 1d ago · · ·
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>>83629 Um...thanks? :unsuresweetie:

I'm not really sure if that was a compliment or an insult, but thanks anyway! :twilightsmile:

#83629 · 43w, 1d ago · · ·
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I just wanted to drop in and say that the sheer redundancy of your name is absolutely fabulous.

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