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Um... · 12:01pm

Hi guys! If you've been following my other account, you'd know that I'm back in the game! And with a question for everybody, too!

So I was looking back on my old story (SotP) and I found it really cliche/unbelievable. People were asking me questions, such as:

Q: Where did they get the cape and sword? It just came out of nowhere!

A: I have no idea.

Q: If Celestia had the map, why didn't she know anything about the forbidden land?

A: I dunno. Maybe you can ask why she's got a map of the CRYSTAL FUCKING EMPIRE and has NO CLUE about it.

Q: SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS

A: That's not a question.

So you can obviously tell that there were a few problems regarding plot in here... And I also cringe at the fact that I made it a copypasta story. NOBODY LIKES COPYPASTA STORIES

So, should I delete it and revise it (With a better name, too: My Little Colossus: Rituals are Magic), or should I continue on as is? It's your decision!

Until next time!

-Digit

Digit · 27 views

CROSSOVERS HERE


Shadow of the Pony

After Rarity has died due to heavy illness with no cure, Spike hears the legend of Dormin, an ancient god who might be able to revive Rarity. Spike travels with Rainbow Dash into the forbidden land to help get Rarity back, and soon finds it will be harder than they thought. But Spike takes big risks to get a chance to revive Rarity, even if it means taking his own life.

After all, love can be painful...

My second ever crossover story. This is a mix of Shadow of the Colossus and My Little Pony.

My Little Pony is owned by Hasbro.

Shadow of the Colossus is owned by team ICO.

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#152137 · 32w, 20h ago · · ·
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>>152135

The Great Mighty Poo will approve.

#152135 · 32w, 20h ago · · ·
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>>152134

Oh.

Oh snap.

This gunna be GOOD.

#152134 · 32w, 20h ago · · ·
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>>152110

Okay,then I want you to do a crossover of:

Conker's Bad fur day(Spike as Conker).

#152110 · 32w, 21h ago · · ·
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>>151936

Positive :moustache:

#151936 · 32w, 1d ago · · ·
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>>151931

Are you sure ?

#151931 · 32w, 1d ago · · ·
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>>149103

Throw it at me :rainbowdetermined2:

#149103 · 32w, 3d ago · · ·
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I would have requested a crossover of a certain game,but I don't think you're up for it.

#132088 · 35w, 1d ago · · ·
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