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Crystal Shards
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5,610 words ( 8 chapters ) · 106 views
· The Heart of stone had finally showed up when all was lost, and the city was saved. Its power cleansed the land of which everypony stood upon. What it didn't clean though, were the ponies themselves. Dark shards seen growing from the ground are starting to show up on some of the crystal ponies. The battle was won that day, but not the war.
Note: For the best results please read on a computer in Serif, Small, Dark. This story is NOT phone friendly.
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The Bounty of a Wish
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1,142 words · 537 views
· This Rainbow mare wished upon a star,
not knowing what was looming just afar.
She soon forgot about her little pact,
Never knowing it would actually come back.
Here is the tale about the young mare,
When all she got was a lot of despair.
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I saw those groups about word counts. I know the counter has been disabled, but I wanted to know what you estimate your count to be. I'm trying to figure out when the number becomes larger than most.
So you're a professional now huh? I'm only kidding but seriously, I'm happy for you. You are one of the few critics on here that are well respected rather than hated. Now I haven't heard from you in a while so i came to say hi and see how you're doing. And maybe later we can discuss collab ideas and such. Hope to talk to you soon!
-Magic
>>54475 thanks, take your time. You kinda are professional 19 million words under your belt shows experience, and your previous review of one of my stories was of professional quality
Hi Dezmo
You did a review of my story ("the great colt war") a while back, and it was very helpful. Ive got another (few) stories out now, but one has particularly good feedback so far. I mostly wanted to know what a professional reviewer like you thanks. Little Piece of Grey
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Review this story for me please?
I have finally found someone who has read more words than you! I didn't think it was possible!
You probably already know that i have a new story out and I was wondering if you could do another one of your great reviews on it. Thats all.
I just saw how many estimated words you have read and am a little humbled by it with my measly 3 million and I know what you're going to say:
and I'll say:
Make moar stories. "Bounty of a wish" Was incredible, and i think that, with your talent, you could make another incredible one