The Sun and her little Sparkle...2? · 12:38am
alright guys. I'm starting to feel romance withdrawal... I had a sudden idea just now about three different things.
The first is that I'm going to exploit the fact that the story is indeed an alternate universe and to hell with my previous plans of not introducing any of the other elements. I've already got that planned out, so if you have any suggestions for that particular idea I'd appreciate it if you either kept them small enough to read quickly or to keep them to yourself- thanks in advance.
The second idea is the romance part. I think I'm, once again, going to exploit the alternate universe and bring Luna into it. That will also directly tie into the third thing, but as an extension of this part I'm going to have it so that Luna is- at the very least- not of blood relation to Celestia so that the shipping between her and Twilight will hopefully not be too strange. I was thinking along the lines of metaphorical sisters and childhood friends sort of thing.
And the last thing, the end of the story. You guys are either going to have to kick my face in with suggestions or deal with a slightly abrupt ending. I want to make the second 'half' of this idea have romance in it and possibly violence- you can only go so long without writing what you're used to- and if that's going to happen then it will have to be humanized; otherwise it's much harder for me to write.
I'm not setting the third part in stone, and the only thing that's solid about the second part is Luna's introduction. I'll leave what I haven't already decided on up to you guys- because if it weren't for you guys this would have been a tiny oneshot.
TL;DR expect some major events in the future involving the elements and Luna, tell me if you're alright with a sequel having romance and possibly violence and if you WANT a sequel, otherwise it'll be a timeskip.







>>495637 if memory serves one of the facebook pages I follow posted it. I'd go and find it for you, but it was so long ago. If I knew the real source I'd say
Just curious where you got your profile pic. :)
>>336396 my other stuff is on gdocs so it'd be a bunch of links, but most of them i link in blog posts. and thanks, i needed that today
>>334250
Your other fanfics and original stories, like I said, you're a good author, just need to finish stuff. Tartarus was great, Scarlet was awesome, Unexpected Friends was awesome, Crimson Night is actually one of my favorite fics, hell the only fic that I wasn't too fond of was Survival is Hell, and that's just because I'm not a huge fan of that genre. People here like your stories, and I've been reading em for a while. Though it's only recently that I started favoriting/upvoting/following/commenting etc. Your work is good, don't ever doubt that.
>>334090 a link to what?
>>327613 Post a link.
>>327422 honestly i think i'm done with fimfiction for a good long while. have been for quite a time now too. I've tried starting new stories and even rewriting old ones or simply updating existing ones and I just cant. I work a lot on other fanfiction that's not fimfiction and a lot of original stories, though, and that's where my attention has gone now. I did promise a chapter of scarlet high though so hopefully I can get that out soon...
>>282518 You just gotta buckle down and finish em. As you keep doing this you'll just get less and less readers as they see that you never finish anything. Eventually people will see a new story from you and say "who cares" and wont even bother looking. You're a good writer, but this doing this so much could kill off your chances of your work being followed.
>>314981 I found both. And stuffed them into the dark hole behind the mask forged of utter despair that I use at all times! Apparently, sanity is finite, and now there is less of it! Yayyyyyyy!
>>314818 thanks, and if you see my sanity, keep it.
I don't want it back