Hey I Won Something · 4:52am
Well I know I have not written anything yet storywise so I am not expecting any feedback but hey I thought this was cool enough to post anyway.
Oddly while I prefer stories the first and thus far only Pony related material I have done thus far is a poem. Funny enough I avoided poems like the plague so it is funny that I decided to do this. The poem was for a contest and it was to be a serious poem about Pinkie Pie. Being a Pinkie Pie fan I decided to give it a shot and I got second place so without further ado here is the Poem "One Trick Pony" (title is temporary for now)
Since the day my mother bore me,
I was a pony of extremes,
at first like a rock silently,
and then parties and chronic memes.
Extremes are fun and friends are too,
but sometimes I feel like a foal,
I look glad but that is not true,
so what is this knife in my soul.
They say you see in the eyes,
the truth of who you are inside,
with mirror magic I gave rise,
to things that friends did not confide.
All that they wanted was more fun,
never thinking of their actions,
my poor Ponyville was overrun,
I understood the reactions.
Seeing the writing on the wall,
the painting deciding my fate,
I realized if I now fall,
my lesson would come far too late.
I fought through boredom unaided,
I regained my true sense of self,
pinkies were gone and fear faded,
my troubles were left on the shelf.
two lessons learned but one was mute,
that one lesson filled me with dread,
and while they think of me as cute,
I have a big question ahead.
Am I just a one trick pony,
looking for laughter with no thought,
can I be true and not phony,
more real than the copy I sought?
Feel free to comment on it if you like. Big thanks for Emerald Flight for having the contest and choosing my poem for 2nd place!







>>326900nah, this is not my pixie. This is Timothy. Was probably going to take your suggestion, because I like to think I am the party buffer. The heal every three rounds or so having a heal go off? Nice!
>>326219
Of course and thank you but I think you will have to inform me on the particulars in this case of how I am insane.
Also mountain tombstone strike is great but I don't think that is the best first choice. White Raven and SoRV off party wide beneifts that probably are better first choices and they are not rendered useless by any creature immune to con damage or you being off the ground.
Wait is this your pixie like character? If you can fly that will ruin 1/3 of your available maneuvers or keep you from using your mobility. Tough break.
You're insane.
Thank you for agreeing with me! Here's your reward:
Silver out!
Thanks for the fave on One Bet.
>>154993>
Totally understand and I hope that you did not take my comment as an insult (I was hoping the tone was perceivable as levity). I just wanted to give you more positive comments to show that people still really like your work and desire to hear new ideas from you. I do hope that whatever problems you are facing get resolved in as happy a manor as possible.
Now writers block is tough but I bet it will be easier if real life cuts you some slack. I know from experience how hard stress, outside of the project itself, can hinder the creative process. For me it was composing music for a class and my non-class work stress really hurt my creativity until I was able to get through the rough patch. Fortunately for me the rough patch ended with enough time for me to get the project done. I hope you can be so fortunate.
It'll get finished when I finish it. It's a combination of writer's blocks and my life being a giant pile of shit. So you'll just have to wait, I'm afraid. :/
I will be taking a hiatus from writing for a while, although I do have a few story ideas in my head that I wish to play out.
Thank you for your support, whether it was following me, watching me, or commenting on my stories with your honest opinion. It all helps me improve as a writer. Yes, this message is copy pasted, but that doesn't mean that it isn't true. Any amount of support, makes me very happy and continues my desire to write.
Once again, thank you, and have a good day/week/month.
~Vicodin
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