It's a good story, it's funny, it has great background and lore behind it, and it all fits together like a mantis to it's partner just before it eats him alive. Fun!
Thanks, I guess. I'm surprised I didn't follow you earlier since I was there when The Reader just begun. Alas, poor Yorick. I'll let it slide past my OCD that acts up when people post "Thanks for the favorite/watch" for who you are. Enjoy!
P.S. Oh, and keep on working your magic on both the Reader and Watcher. Now. Pretty please?
The composition, grammar wise, is really frantic and unsettled, and makes it a pain to read, but on the other hand also manages to somehow perfectly transfer the feeling of the character being a confused child.
The premise?
A person is turned into a foal, and whatever she/he can imagine comes into existence. Interesting concept, and I like it.
It will be immensly hard to execute properly, so I cross my fingers for you.
So I guess that's that. How you convey how the character "feels" and the concept of the story.
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>>489000
I'll do my best, then! :D
>>488995
Woot Toot, finally someone actually noticed!
It's a good story, it's funny, it has great background and lore behind it, and it all fits together like a mantis to it's partner just before it eats him alive. Fun!
Carry on mate, I want more by the end of the day!
Thanks for the fave! :D
EDIT: Oh, sorry.
I'm still happy you like my story.
>>467492
Thanks, I guess. I'm surprised I didn't follow you earlier since I was there when The Reader just begun. Alas, poor Yorick. I'll let it slide past my OCD that acts up when people post "Thanks for the favorite/watch" for who you are. Enjoy!
P.S. Oh, and keep on working your magic on both the Reader and Watcher. Now. Pretty please?
Thank you very much for watching!
>>452131
Jesus bloody fliping fuck on a motorbike.
Why does everyone keep writing "Thanks for the fav" on my bloody wall? It's all over it that it is redundant, yet people continue to do so. Jesus.
Also, don't get giddy all over. I did that to keep an eye on it, not because I loved it really much.
Just shush and go do something productive.
Thank you for the favorite!
>>395211 you got the idea and premise perfectly! And yes IT IS HARD. Its glad to know pthers appreciate that.
>>394964
It is hard to tell, actually.
The composition, grammar wise, is really frantic and unsettled, and makes it a pain to read, but on the other hand also manages to somehow perfectly transfer the feeling of the character being a confused child.
The premise?
A person is turned into a foal, and whatever she/he can imagine comes into existence. Interesting concept, and I like it.
It will be immensly hard to execute properly, so I cross my fingers for you.
So I guess that's that. How you convey how the character "feels" and the concept of the story.
There ya go.
Thx for the fav. But, what did you like best about my story?