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Now that my life is finally stabilizing itself, I return to continue my story. (Also to fix this past/present tense problem).

I'm also going to keep trying to publish my stuff more frequently, but a little shorter than what I usually do, so I don't linger in the same place for too long. A mistake I learned that drained me of energy while writing Chapter seven.

Well here's to Chapter eight and I hope to start right away on nine tomorrow!

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The End is the Beginning

The Age of the Imperium is coming to an end. The Emperor's light glows dim as time continues it's endless march. There can be no peace among the stars. No safety can be found in the void. Attacked from within by separatists and heretics, besieged from without by xenos and daemons. His domain dwindles, planet by planet and system by system. The High Lords of Terra are forced to partake in wars ever more costly and apocalyptic. Survival is no birthright, but a prize wrestled from an uncaring galaxy by forgotten heroes. As the darkness close in, the Imperium of Man are at war as never before. A hundred thousand warzones are spread across the galaxy, wracked in constant endless unremitting war. This is humanity's darkest hour.

In the Eastern Fringe of the Ultima Segmentum, the Medusa V campaign is coming to a close as the Warp Anomaly Van Grothes' Rapidity moves to consume the planet. Facing this bizarre and deadly celestial phenomenon, the Imperial Guard are deployed to evacuate as many citizens their cargo can hold will while fending off the heretical forces of Chaos and opportunistic xeno raiders taking advantage of the discord. But their efforts comes at a terrible price and the Guardsmen of the 82nd Vendolant are abandoned to their doom. In their final act of defiance, they'll have to make a decision between duty and destiny.

The Imperium (as well as myself) thanks these individuals for helping me proofread this fiction:

Macharius

Falling Brass

Voskhod

and Dozy Dreamer

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#375771 · 13w, 2d ago · · ·
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>>122685

Its a little late for that now as I have about 60 some infantry at this point.  I'll brake things up by squad and stagger my progress. :twilightblush: I'm actually working on finishing the first 200pts. of my nid army at the moment. Pics

#229286 · 26w, 6d ago · · ·
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So when can we expect the next chapter?

#215418 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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Yeah, for some reason I get really annoyed when people call the Imperial guard cowards (usually space marine players).

"Lets put you in their shoes and see if you fair any better, eh?"

The guard is my favorite army, fluff wise.

#213551 · 28w, 3d ago · · ·
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I just wanted to tell you that I don't actually play space marines. I play Tyranids :pinkiecrazy:.

#195970 · 30w, 2d ago · · ·
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>>195769

I'm still working on it. Just trying to refocus my direction and get the situation in RL stabilized. I've got some progress done, so I'll have something to show for some time this week.

#122685 · 40w, 2d ago · · ·
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>>120613 You just started a Guard army? Good choice, there are way too many Space Marine players in my opinion. Just don't get too many models at the same time; having so much unpainted models can diminish your spirits a bit. I'm glad your enjoying my story.  

#120613 · 40w, 4d ago · · ·
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Having started Gard and 40k not long ago I'm really enjoying Your story and am Looking froward to more updates to it!

#16095 · 60w, 6h ago · · ·
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I've got to say that I love how you included Commissar Holt, I love your transition from the WH40K universe to the MlP universe and I love the way you have managed to turn the usually faceless guardsmen into interesting individuals. I am eagerly waiting for the next delicious chapters in your story and I really want to commend you on quality of your work. :pinkiehappy:

Rock on in the name of the God-Emperor! :moustache:

  

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