The Fox and Hound · 6:25am
This evening, I decided to fix up some issues with my story, It Is My Fate To Enter Every Door.
Okay, fine. Pinkie Pie has an older sister. I fudged my story to admit that.*
Per Benman's suggestion, I've rearranged the opening, so that Emma's story comes to the fore.
Most importantly, I've added a scene with Vixen the Clever and her nemesis, Laelaps the Hunter. The business with Vixen follows the pattern of mortals dealing with fay spirits. The story of Laelaps is softer; I liked the idea that Laelaps is fond of Vixen, despite her treachery.
*Fudged again: Matilda Victoria Pie: Maud. I like that the daughters of Clydesdale Pie have these odd, grandiose names. Is it his influence, or hers?