Cloud Wander

Joined April 2012
314 followers
22,617 story views
2d, 19h ago

Be kind. For everyone you meet, life is a hard battle.

Feb
14th
2014

The Fox and Hound · 6:25am

This evening, I decided to fix up some issues with my story, It Is My Fate To Enter Every Door.

Okay, fine. Pinkie Pie has an older sister. I fudged my story to admit that.*

Per Benman's suggestion, I've rearranged the opening, so that Emma's story comes to the fore.

Most importantly, I've added a scene with Vixen the Clever and her nemesis, Laelaps the Hunter. The business with Vixen follows the pattern of mortals dealing with fay spirits. The story of Laelaps is softer; I liked the idea that Laelaps is fond of Vixen, despite her treachery.

*Fudged again: Matilda Victoria Pie: Maud. I like that the daughters of Clydesdale Pie have these odd, grandiose names. Is it his influence, or hers?

Cloud Wander · 135 views · Edited 9w, 15h ago · Report · Story: It Is My Fate To Enter Every Door

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Comments

#1029214 · 6w, 3d ago · · ·

Yeah, pretty much what >>771527 said.

I just finished reading Short Cakes, and it's wonderful. I'll leave a longer comment over on the story, but I think, even alone, it's plenty to convince me that I'd like to know when you've got things to say or stories to tell.

#905720 · 15w, 6d ago · · ·

Awesome stories, bro! :raritywink:

#771527 · 28w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

It ain't fair. You're a famous ponyfic author. Truth is I hadn't looked for your stories because I'd heard your name mentioned so often that I made... assumptions. You've got 8 fics on EqD. All the cool writers follow you. You've got the rare ability to suck me in without relying on hooks or plot, something I think only Skywriter, Chuck Finley, and Cold in Gardez have done. But you've only got 229 watchers. It's perplexing and a little troubling.

(230 now.)

#741853 · 30w, 5d ago · 1 · ·

A friend recommended you and after starting with 'Joshing and tearing through a couple more I have come to a singular conclusion. You sir, are a boss of the nth degree. Nicely done.

#722956 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·

Well, after randomly stumbling on the second one of your stories that I liked, I decided I'd give you a watch. :pinkiehappy:

Also, I like the Cake Twins and it appears that you have written about half of the stories starring them on the whole site!

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