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CitrusFizz


I love fan-fiction, and especially HiE and anything involving Spike finally getting older. I am open to criticism and comments, anything to help me be a better writer. Thank you, and enjoy the fic!

Jan
24th
2014

Ze Critisism! I Vant it! · 3:13am Jan 24th, 2014

Hey there guys! Citrus Fizz here! This blog is for a few guys in particular, those who dislike my story. Now, I won't go and try and make you feel bad for your choices and tastes, you don't like my story, and I can respect that. However, I wanna know why. If you have the time, please, comment on why you think the story is bad. Like my description says, I'm open to constructive criticism, so I would really appreciate your help. Is it flat character design, plot holes? Please, by all means

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Coffee, but sparingly

Tea or coffee?

Hey there! :pinkiehappy:

Thanks for making a favourite of The Heavenfall! If there's anything at any point during the story you'd like to point out or have a question about, be sure to leave me a comment. :twilightsmile:

Once again, thanks! :scootangel:

Thanks for stalking me man.:pinkiecrazy:

Thanks for watching and welcome to FIMFiction!

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