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Comment posted by gameandwatchfan deleted Aug 5th, 2014

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Videos? Where we're going, we don't need videos.
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I had to laugh when I saw that he'd even copied the grammar error in this sentence:

The only punishment was an increase girth.

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(For the record, that should either read "The only punishment was an increase in girth", or "The only punishment was an increased girth.")

Not only that, he even has the original story in his favourites. :facehoof:

As Luna would say, "The stupidity hath been doubled." :rainbowlaugh:

Grand and Bountiful Trixie by Conflicted writer:
"The confections and meals were turned into energy or fat from the moment they hit the digestive system. How was a pony to feel full when what they ate vanished instantly? And the addictive nature of such perfected taste meant the craving would never be satisfied, nor would it be punished with the feeling of being sick. The only punishment was an increase girth.
Already Trixie’s weight had skyrocketed to the point her explosion of excess was as grand as one of her fireworks at full blast. No longer was she just a pudgy mare, she was fat. Each of her butt cheeks was a slab with the consistency of a water balloon filled to the brim; wobbly, shaking at the slighting movement (and Trixie’s chomping created several). Nevermind the fact each buttock could hold a beefy filly each.
Cake for the Sun By Cookie Chip:
The slices turned into fat from the moment they hit the digestive system. How could she feel full when what she ate vanished instantly? And the addictive nature of such perfected taste meant the craving would never be satisfied, nor would it be punished with the feeling of being sick. The only punishment was an increase girth. Already Celestia’s weight had skyrocketed. No longer was she just a pudgy mare, she was fat. Each of her butt cheeks was a slab with the consistency of a water balloon filled to the brim; wobbly, shaking at any slighting movement.
You didn't learn your lesson the first time. Shame on you. Plagiarism is stealing and unethical. The Conflicted Writer wrote that story as a commission. Someone paid him to write that story. He does this for a living, and you go and steal his work and try to pass it off as your own. Do us a favor and don’t come back. Your kind is not welcome here.

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