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Celestia 0697

Joined February 2012
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    May
    20th
    2013

    Greetings, my little ponies. I hope all of you have been well, I myself am doing better than previously. I certainly hope that it will remain as such in the coming weeks. Shall we?

    Gummy Pie

    Twilight tests out a new spell, but everyone's favorite local baby alligator gets in the way.

    One would imagine that transformative magic was already fairly well-researched. Did Twilight Sparkle not turn mice to horses at one point? Regardless, this has started out interestingly despite the slightly non-original storyline, and peculiar repetitions in the first few paragraphs of the first chapter.

    Forgive me, dear ponies, it is another single story weekend. My well of potential postings has been somewhat dry as of late, but one is better than none, is it not? Do have a good week.

    Celestia · 27 views
    May
    13th
    2013

    Good day, dear ponies. I am aware that this is a day late, and I have very few excuses for my tardiness. Do have a story.

    A Day for Mommy

    Ponies and many other creatures all over the world celebrate their mothers.

    I will admit, I have little to say about this story. It did, however, almost bring a tear to my eye.

    Forgive me, again, for this exceptionally short posting. Things have been fairly busy but I will continue to update this on a weekly basis. Assuming the royal computer does not spontaneously combust.

    Celestia · 35 views
    May
    6th
    2013

    Another week, another batch of stories to share. I do hope all of you have had good days, and those that were bad were not long-lasting. Here are the tales:

    Lyra opens a border to Ponyville

    Lyra opens a border to Ponyville. Of course.

    This is certainly randomness for the sake of randomness. I really have no idea what to think of it, especially towards the end. The writing itself is alright, but paragraphs are much better than an enormous block of text.

    Welcoming Generosity

    A young Rarity comes to Ponyville and meets one of its shyest of residents.

    While this story has a cute start, it unfortunately flounders around for a while. Ponies also leave character fairly often. Otherwise, it is a cute start and will hopefully shed some light on the friendship of the two main characters.

    I hope the upcoming week treats all of you well, my dear ponies.

    Celestia · 26 views
    Apr
    28th
    2013

    Greetings, my little ponies. Once again, I come with only one story this week. Stress has been getting to me, it seems. At least the weather has been nice. Shall we?

    Twilight Sparkle Hates a Book

    Twilight Sparkle hates a book. But you knew that already.

    Now there's a title I never thought I'd see. The story itself is well-written, though a little awkward. It refers to the reader quite a bit. Also, the ending has a rather unexpected little twist. Who knew that this could happen?

    Again, I apologize for the short post, dear ponies. Hopefully things will start looking up in the coming weeks, but we shall see.

    Celestia · 40 views
    Apr
    21st
    2013

    Good day, dear ponies. I'm afraid it is another short post here, only one story. I will not delve too deeply into why, but suffice to say things have been difficult.

    Alicorn or... Alicorn? (Chapter 1)

    Sometimes, things do not go as planned.

    I really do not know what to think of this story. It doesn't portray itself in a particularly comedic light, but it is largely amusing. Perhaps the writer will expand it beyond a simple one-chapter story.

    Be well, my little ponies.

    Celestia · 40 views
    Apr
    14th
    2013

    Good day, my dear ponies. I hope all of you are enjoying April, even if it has a habit of being rainy one moment and sunny the next. At least it will help the flowers and other vegetation to grow. I'm afraid that I only have a single story update this time, as I have been feeling fairly under the weather. Here you are:

    Pony Jokes for Brony Folks (Chapters 25 through 27)

    You all already know what these stories are about.

    And my general thoughts on them.

    As I said, a very short posting. Forgive me, hopefully next weekend will be better. I hope that all of you are feeling better than I.

    Celestia · 21 views
    Apr
    7th
    2013

    Here we are, ponies, the first Sunday of April. I hope all of you had a pleasant week, and would love to hear any April Fools Day stories you may have. Also, do have a few stories.

    Second Chances (Chapter 1)

    With her hundreds of changelings gone and her life ruined post-royal wedding, Queen Chrysalis finds a familiar face near her makeshift home.

    Unfortunately, this story is a fair bit rushed. The writing itself is fine, but the pacing needs to be drawn out a little more. Plus, the ending is fairly confusing and comes out of nowhere.

    Pinkie's Candyland

    Pinkie Pie finds a wishing well. Need I say more?

    I seem to have found a bunch of rushed stories, today. Pacing, my little ponies, pacing. You do not need to cram as much story as you can into as few words as possible.

    Do enjoy the coming week, dear ponies.

    Celestia · 25 views
    Mar
    31st
    2013

    Greetings, my little ponies. I hear there is a human holiday today. I wish all of you a wonderful day. Here are a few stories to compliment it:

    Imagine (Chapter 1)

    The most precious thing a young pony can have is their imagination, and nothing can take it away from them.

    Had I a better summary for this story, I would have placed it above this line. I do not. Imagination. It can turn cardboard boxes into castles. Sofa cushions into fortresses. Lakes into endless seas. The limit is your mind. However, do not stay out in the rain if it is cold. You could become very sick.

    Fluttershy Gets a New Fridge (Chapter 1)

    Just read the title.

    Well, I've found it interesting. But the most worrying part of this entire story is that part about the knife. Must writers make things so dark? Otherwise, I have little to say about this, other than it's intriguing.

    Forgive me if this entire post seems rushed, dear ponies. I will try better next week, but we shall see.

    Celestia · 47 views
    Mar
    24th
    2013

    My little ponies. It is already so bright outside, and I am so very happy. Spring is here, at last. Stories?

    Love, Ellabee (Chapters 2 and 3)

    Princess Celestia receives a letter from a child going through very rough times. A connection is made through mail, but what will come of it?

    Who knew that there was a portal to another world in my own palace? I must look into this. Also, a tiny bit of constructive criticism. Some of the lines should have had commas, not periods. The sudden stop in some sections of a few paragraphs are a little jolting, but it doesn't fault the story over all.

    Pony Jokes for Brony Folks (Chapters 21 through 24)

    Of course they returned. More absolutely dreadful puns. I do mean that in a good way, however. I'm consolidating both the summary and critique paragraphs for this one because, really. I've already said my piece on these chapters, they just made me roll my eyes or smile at this point.

    Now that my favorite season is here, I hope all of you enjoy the warming weather, blooming flowers, and avoid the rise in insects.

    Celestia · 34 views · Edited 8w, 5d ago
    Mar
    17th
    2013

    Greetings, my dear ponies. I hope all of you have had a good week. Spring will be here very soon, and with it warmer weather. At least for many. I hope the new layout of this website isn't too confusing. I know it is for me. Regardless, here are the stories.

    Celestia and Luna vs A Ball (Chapter 1)

    Young Princesses Celestia and Luna battle the latest threat against Equestria's safety: A ball with a star on it. The horror.

    It's short, it's full of fluff, it won't really cause deep thoughts. But it is cute and nostalgic.

    Love, Ellabee (Chapter 1)

    Ellabee has lost everything she's ever known, gets bullied every day, and feels unwanted to the world. The only thing that keeps her going is her favorite show, My Little Pony: Freindship is Magic. Writing letters to Princess Celestia is the only thing that feels right to her, even if no one ever reads them.

    Forgive me for copying and pasting the summary, but I could not think of a way to shorten it. The chapter itself is saddening, but something about the end seems to hint at happier times ahead. Or perhaps that is my own optimism. I certainly hope so.

    And with that, my little ponies, I leave you until next week. I hope all of you enjoy the change of season, as I know I will.

    Celestia · 49 views