"Largo" Update · 10:59pm
I rewrote the back half of the third chapter, so do go check that out if you have the chance. I think I may have originally developed the plot a little too much before they even made it to the Gala, so I wanted to leave things a little more open so that things could happen at the Gala that weren't exactly possible beforehand. So please, do read that chapter again if you so desire. And comments are always appreciated, too. If you liked what I changed, why? If not, why not? I'm still a new writer, still trying to get a feel for my personal style, so reader input will help me figure out what works and what doesn't.
As for when a new chapter might be out. I'm going to attempt to have something new for you folks by Thursday or Friday. Right now I'm busy writing a term paper (on Sibelius's Tapiola; great piece, highly recommend listening to it) due Wednesday, and this weekend is our annual weekend-long, campus-wide party, so I'm probably going to be some level of inebriated for most of it...college senior, remember?
Anyways, stay tuned, and as always, thanks for reading.