Hello everybody who's actually giving a damn about reading this!
Well, being gone without an update for a week or two has left probably many in the dark about what I've been trying to do. Let me assure you that this time was dedicated to two things; creating character details and plot structure. Although I must admit I'm going at a slower pace than what I was expecting, but that is because I have also decided to use this time to just avoid and get away from the writing in general. It helps that you stay away from a piece of work for a while, so you can come back at it with fresher eyes and can pick at it and critique it much better.
A little while ago, a chat member on the chat here on fimfiction gave me two very helpful links on story and pacing. I must admit that I was surprisingly doing the basic story RIGHT! As one video describes, one way of telling a story was called "In Media Res" meaning that the story starts off at or close to the action, whilst the background and personalities of the characters from Act 1 (The act which establishes the personality, relationships, and background of characters) are littered throughout Act 2 instead (The act in which the most action happens, when the hero is gathering the skills, team, weapons, MacGuffin, etc. to be able to solve the dramatic question that was presented in the end of Act 1 or the beginning of Act 2). I'm actually proud of myself for stumbling onto that, even though I really didn't mean for it to happen. I was lucky I guess *laughs*
Anyway, the part where I need the most help in was the pacing as a whole, in both the arc format and the story format. This is where I'm having the most trouble. Since I will admit that I didn't plan many of the events in between, I've been drawing a blank as to what should happen and when they should. Although I'm optimistic that all I need is a good sit down session with myself and just do a big brainstorm.
The biggest concern so far, at least for me, is the character building and development. I will admit, the more I look at this story, the more I feel... well, I feel that Chad's pretty flat. I can see that I've got a grasp of what he SHOULD be, but he's not as developed as I WANT him to be. Plus, the more I read about him, the more he feels like a self-insert. Not that it's a bad thing, since I intended for him and I to share SOME things together, such as original birthplaces, love of the bronydom, etc. Yet, I feel that I have made too MUCH of myself into him, and feel that it makes him seem Mary-Sueish. I can guarantee that he's definitely a lot braver...and dumber than I am facing AJ like in chapter 3 but so far that's nothing as to creating his actual character. I'm going to go all out on writing his, and future OC's background, personality, skills, etc. to build a more widespread assortment of characters that are realistic and rounded. This being said, I might have to go to square one into writing this thing, probably erasing whole chapters and building them back together piece by piece. This is going to be the biggest hurtle for me as a beginning writer, but I believe that if I can accomplish this, I'll grow indefinitely. I'd appreciate anyone's support in this time.
Also, whilst I'm rambling, I have also joined a collab called "Pony-Fall" which is somewhat like my own concept of "Ponies on Earth". As a challenge to myself, I have decided to choose two characters that would be a bit of a difference that any of my story characters would get; Derpy Hooves and her daughter. I've got some good ideas going with these two, and writing about the struggles of a single parent trapped and struggling in a new world will definitely be a change of pace to my own story. Also have a theme thought through about the feelings of mistakes, failures, and self-acceptance for this one. I'm proud to say I have several chapters already written, but they won't be released until I finish with the first hurtle of my own story. Also, this story will be more lighthearted and humorous...well, I can't say that since MOST of my stories are going to be that way.
Also, I appreciate the two people who have wished to help me in the Grammar and punctuation departments. Your help will be greatly accepted. Anyone else who is willing to help I will humbly and gladly accept.
Thank you all for your time and patience.