Great story, I must say. I thought I'd blog about it here, since it may have sparked my next idea (not telling). The writing is very well done, in my opinion, and I think the characterization is great. The plot certainly looks like it's going places, and yes, it's sort of a Choose Your Own Adventure thing, where you'll vote on things.
In other news, I recently picked up Doctor Who. I'd been meaning to for a long time, ever since last summer when I worked with GingerNutGin on his story, Our Limbo, but it wasn't until now that I finally found time to.
I freakin' love this show.
I finally got Netflix, too, so I might disappear for a few days while I devour episode after episode until I'm caught up on it, and then I'll probably go back and watch the Classic Doctor Who. And yes, I started with Rose and the 9th doctor.
That's my status update.
I reiterate, I definitely recommend Equestria RPG.
Have a wonderful, adventurous day. everypony!