Blood Lord

Joined June 2013
1,845 story views
12h, 30m ago

The objective of fiction isn’t grammatical correctness but to make the reader welcome and then tell a story …to make him/her forget, whenever possible, that he/she is reading a story at all.

Latest Stories

  • Empress Rarity's 250th BirthdayToday is the Birthday of the Empress of the Crystal Empire, Rarity Belle. Everypony is excited for the celebrations, that is everypony except for one... (A tale from the PTS 500 Universe)41,416 words ·1,845 views ·235 likes ·6 dislikes

Stories I've helped with

I've had the pleasure of helping a lot of people out by being their proof-reader and/or editor. I will admit, I get a ton of personal joy out of helping them all with their ideas. Here are their stories.


Princess Twilight Sparkle's 500th Birthday

Princess Twilight Sparkle's 505th Birthday

The name's Burt. Just Burt.

The Gift Horse

Running Late in Manehatten

The 37th Librarian

Princess Twilight Sparkle's 25th Birthday


An Icy Existence

Weeping Angel


The Pink Mugsy

The Hanging of Twilight Sparkle

Trixie's Last Letter


One Last Crusade


Not So Pink-ie Pie


Shoots and Roots (7/3/2014: Featured on Equestrian Daily.)




Those Forgotten

Future writers


Bastion Sky




I do free-lancing editing and proofreading. I specialize in keeping characters in-character, and sentence flow. But I'm also good at grammar and spelling too. Plus, you can always bounce ideas off me. I will work most genres, with the exception of clopfics and HiE stories. Nothing against you that do them, I just have zero skill with them.

The Goal List.


[] Write at least one story that primarily falls into one of these categories.  







Slice of Life

[] Write a oneshot

[] Write an epic

[] Write 5 stories

[] Write 10 stories

[] Write 15 stories

[X] Get featured - Empress Rarity's 250th Birthday - 6/3/2014

[] Get a story in Twilight’s Library.

[] Have a story in every library.

[] Somehow get featured in EQD

[] Participate in a contest

[] Win a contest

[] Get a wiki page on MLP Fan Labor Wiki


[] Edit for a story that makes it into EQD

[] Edit for a current epic, or a developing epic.

[] Edit for one of the big names on FiMfiction (The top 50)

[] Become a library approver


[] Have the following follow me.

Skeeter the Lurker


Daemon of Decay

Comet Burst

YOU (Yes, you, the one reading this)

[] Get followed by a moderator (in a good way)

[] Get followed by a story previewer.

[] Become a legend

[x] Have Fun


Why I didn't get to sleep last night.

  • Celestia in Excelsis One heroic princess is all that stands between the Arch-Enemy of Friendship and all her little ponies. by Kolwynia 58,297 words · 3,888 views · 377 likes · 13 dislikes
  • Blood Curse Boutique With the discovery of herself being a vampony, will Rarity be able to keep her personality high or will she fall into the madness of her own mind? What followed her ever since a stormy night, was a life of deception and blood being spilled. by Rarity Belle 147,058 words · 1,615 views · 157 likes · 13 dislikes
  • Asylum When Twilight Sparkle went to bed, she had friends she loved and a life she enjoyed. But she awoke to hospital gowns and padded restraints. And the doctors, they keep telling her that she is sick and none of it was real. They’re lying, right? by Daemon of Decay 172,150 words · 36,176 views · 3,391 likes · 65 dislikes
  • Night's Favoured Child With her new apprenticeship under Nightmare Moon, Empress of Equestria and Queen of the Eternal Night, the orphan filly Twilight Sparkle plunges head-first into the conspiracies, secrets and intrigues of the Empire. by Municipal Engines 139,323 words · 24,953 views · 2,960 likes · 40 dislikes
  • The Hanging of Twilight Sparkle They used to love her. Her name was one of respect, one denoting a being whose very actions have saved the land multiple times. She once had a bright future before her. Now all that is before her is a crowd, crying for her death. by The Pink Mugsy 23,978 words · 6,096 views · 754 likes · 152 dislikes

Birthday-verse Stories.

  • Princess Twilight Sparkle's 500th Birthday Today is Princess Twilight Sparkle’s 500th birthday! And her most faithful student, an earth pony with a familiar name, can’t wait to celebrate! by Autumnschild 12,757 words · 9,309 views · 1,294 likes · 15 dislikes
  • Princess Twilight Sparkle's 505th Birthday The sequel to Princess Twilight Sparkle's 500th Birthday by Autumnschild 104,072 words · 5,100 views · 848 likes · 11 dislikes
  • Empress Rarity's 250th Birthday Today is the Birthday of the Empress of the Crystal Empire, Rarity Belle. Everypony is excited for the celebrations, that is everypony except for one... (A tale from the PTS 500 Universe) by Blood Lord 41,416 words · 1,845 views · 235 likes · 6 dislikes
  • Princess Twilight Sparkle's 25th Birthday Three fillies from the future find themselves trapped in the past among familiar strangers. Can they return to their own time without changing the fate of the world? Probably not. by Autumnschild 19,944 words · 2,540 views · 468 likes · 5 dislikes

Final's Week · 3:24pm

I hate school.

I'm nearly done with my semester, which for stupid reasons is considered to be the Spring Semester still. So, I am entering into finals week, have about five of them to complete. My rotations at the hospital are nearly done too. That means, as it has for the last few weeks, that any editing jobs I've taken up for various people, have been suspended until I get things completed, which should be next Tuesday... hopefully.

In that time, I am going to be working on my own stories, namely Chapter 8 of ER250. What's going on with that? Well, version one has been... upgraded into a version two, requiring additional writing and editing. Fantastic to have Autumnschild there helping me with it. He has this way of writing Applejack that makes it sound exactly like her. I don't think I've ever read another version of Applejack that has entertained me so much. Well, there is that story with Applejack secretly being a Changeling Queen. But his version is just spot on, so it's fantastic to have him on.

Not just on that either, but much of Chapter 8 has been part of his hand. Version 1 of it left a lot of loose ends, but in this chapter resolves just about everything in a nice, neat little bow. We have the Crystal Heart, Sombra, Rarity, Twilight, Luna, Blueblood, the Doctors, Commander Onyx, Captain Shining Star, a brief appearence of Sweetie Belle, and many others showing up in it. The Chapter is likely to be split, but I need to have the chapter completed before it is done. So Chapter 8 will most likely go live next weekend.

* * *

After school plans involves a ton of joyous dirt biking, crazy shenanigans, and embracing the Applejack side of me and working on the family farm. In that time though, I am going to get all of the editing done that I have set up, but also going to engage writing in four or five stories. I have a Airship/adventure themed story that takes place before season 4. The sequel to Empress Rarity's 250th Birthday. A very special collaboration project with Autumnschild. And then a Daring Do Origins story and/or (there's the four or five) a interesting, non-typical Trixie story of capes and magic.

Bachiavellian's Shoots and Roots was accepted by EQD, you can find the link to the story (and all the other stories I have edited for) on my user page. Delightful story with Carrot Top/Golden Harvest, and Derpy. That was the last major editing I've done. Everyone's favorite Princess Twilight Sparkle's 500th Birthday is also going under the knife, to see if it can get cleaned up and accepted on EQD. It had been submitted before, and was strangely rejected. So that's going to be on going as well. the success at Shoots and Roots getting in made me want to try to get PTS500 in. Tempted to try and get ER250 in there now as well... but I did break down and cry like a little filly when ER250 was rejected from Twilight's Library. Hmm, crossing that off now.

Anyways, that's life and mah plans. Hope everyone is doing well. Anyone got awesome plans for this summer?

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#1132833 · 12w, 4d ago · 5 · ·

Wow, a fave and follow! I know I certainly don't deserve it. Thank you so very much for everything, the support means more than you know.:twilightsmile:

#1128686 · 12w, 6d ago · 3 · ·

I thank you kindly for the fave of Blood Curse Boutique my dear, may you enjoy the chapters to come.

#1121539 · 13w, 2d ago · 1 · ·


Sure, and thank you. Is yours based on the video game of similar name?

#1121528 · 13w, 2d ago · · 3 ·

>>1087440 I like your story.  Hey want to check out my story Ace Combat: Divided Feelings?

#1087440 · 15w, 5d ago · · ·


I've got an update planned for this coming Thursday and some story ideas I'm going to work on.

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