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Blood Lord

The objective of fiction isn’t grammatical correctness but to make the reader welcome and then tell a story …to make them forget, whenever possible, that they are reading a story at all.

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  • E Empress Rarity's 250th Birthday

    Today is the Birthday of the Empress of the Crystal Empire, Rarity Belle. Everypony is excited for the celebrations, that is everypony except for one...  · Blood Lord
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The Goal List.


[] Write at least one story that primarily falls into one of these categories.  







Slice of Life

[] Write a oneshot

[] Write an epic

[] Write 5 stories

[] Write 10 stories

[] Write 15 stories

[X] Get featured - Empress Rarity's 250th Birthday - 6/3/2014

[] Somehow get featured in EQD

[] Participate in a contest

[] Win a contest

[] Get a wiki page on MLP Fan Labor Wiki


[x] Edit for a story that makes it into EQD

[] Edit for a current epic, or a developing epic.

[] Edit for one of the big names on FiMfiction (The top 50)


[] Get followed by a moderator (in a good way)

[] Get followed by a story previewer.

[] Become a legend

[x] Have Fun

[] Open my own group.


Why I stayed up last night.

  • Restraint For Rarity, the words left unsaid are often the most meaningful. by Habanc 51,454 words · 6,555 views · 619 likes · 18 dislikes
  • Blood Curse Boutique With the discovery of herself being a vampony, will Rarity be able to keep her personality high or will she fall into the madness of her own mind? What followed her ever since a stormy night, was a life of deception and blood being spilled. by Rarity Belle 277,720 words · 2,697 views · 239 likes · 30 dislikes
  • Asylum When Twilight Sparkle went to bed, she had friends she loved and a life she enjoyed. But she awoke to hospital gowns and padded restraints. And the doctors, they keep telling her that she is sick and none of it was real. They’re lying, right? by Daemon of Decay 186,316 words · 44,126 views · 3,963 likes · 80 dislikes
  • Night's Favoured Child With her new apprenticeship under Nightmare Moon, Empress of Equestria and Queen of the Eternal Night, the orphan filly Twilight Sparkle plunges head-first into the conspiracies, secrets and intrigues of the Empire. by Municipal Engines 151,268 words · 33,114 views · 3,361 likes · 49 dislikes
  • Re:Harmony A thousand years ago, the three pony tribes failed to form a unified nation, and war doomed the unicorns to near-extinction. Twilight and Applejack now seek the Elements in the hopes of ending the long conflict between pegasi and earth ponies. by starcross7 341,595 words · 4,323 views · 441 likes · 30 dislikes

Birthday-verse Stories.

Stories I've helped with

My classification is story editor. That means I am more skilled with identifying, correcting issues, and improving the elements of the story than I am at figuring out where a comma goes. I deal with character development and keeping characters in character, plot pacing, story flow and ideas, sentence and paragraph structure, and getting attention to a story.

I can work with grammar fairly well, but my efforts on that alone isn't going to get you into EQD. There is also a good chance that you aren't the only one I'm editing for at the moment. Many of these stories are on going and I might be working on them too. That means I'll be a bit slow with your story as I try to get things done.  


Princess Twilight Sparkle's 500th Birthday

Princess Twilight Sparkle's 505th Birthday

The name's Burt. Just Burt.

The Gift Horse

Running Late in Manehatten

The 37th Librarian

Princess Twilight Sparkle's 25th Birthday

A Dinky Hearth's Warming Eve (Eve)


An Icy Existence

Weeping Angel


The Pink Mugsy

The Hanging of Twilight Sparkle

Trixie's Last Letter


One Last Crusade


Not So Pink-ie Pie


Shoots and Roots

In Memoriam




Those Forgotten


Echoing Silence


Chapter 13 of Empress Rarity's 250th Birthday has finally been released. It's an exciting chapter where we get to see more of the villain, why pictures are important, and just what this day means to the Empress!

I do apologize for how long it has taken, I've actually been sitting on the completed chapter for several weeks now. ER250 has been getting a grammatical overhaul, a complete scrub and polish job by Razalon the Lizardman. There was a lot of grammar mistakes, a lot of typos, and it was frankly embarrassing because I thought there was only a few. Nope. Anyways, he did a great job with it, and he was on I think Chapter 8 or 9 when I got 13 back from Autumn. So I kept it and decided to get the story freshly cleaned before getting 13 published.

As for Chapter 14, outline stage is complete, I have no real issues with it, but I am severely lacking time.

I am graduating this year, in one month to be exact, with my Associates of Science in Nursing. I have a lot of tests, lab simulations, and more hours of study to commit to the situation than I care to fathom at the moment. So work on ER250 might happen during this month, or I might just go dark for a bit.

Anyways, I hope everyone is having a good year so far. Thank you for your support!


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#34 · 2w, 11h ago · · ·


Yeah. I did once too.

That was a trippy experience.

#33 · 2w, 12h ago · · ·

I always think you're Alcatraz with that pic of yours.

#32 · 3w, 2d ago · · ·


Well, sweet. That's awesome that you're going to college. Visit the tutors as often as you can though.

Alright, just send me the links or allow my email account to have access to the docs and I'll give them a look at.

#31 · 3w, 5d ago · · ·


Congrads, man. What college did you get into?

University of Denver. I didn't expect acceptance, seeing as how my GPA is distressingly low. I guess having a couple hundred hours of volunteer work really does make an application stand out, after all.

So, I won't turn a friend away, but it may be a while depending on the level of work required.

Thanks! It shouldn't be too much. The stories right now are really short and simple.

#30 · 3w, 5d ago · · ·


I got accepted into college, and that took a ton of stress off me.

Congrads, man. What college did you get into?

Oddly, I can't focus on any of the writing projects I wanted to focus on. Instead of getting into Discord's Bored Board Games like I'd planned, I ended up writing two silly one-shots in the space of two hours.

Bah, it happens. Don't beat on yourself about it. It can do the mind and the story some good to take a break, work on something else or look at something else. That way, when you return, you'll have a fresh perspective.

I'd say that it's going well, but it isn't going the way I'd planned. I wouldn't say that is a bad thing, but it's frustrating to not be able to follow through with what I said I'd be doing.

Story of my life.    -__-

Would you be available again to help out this stupid writer and his inconsistent words? I improved a lot when you helped me last time, and I'd like to able to continue to learn from you, if you'd let me.

Sure. I might be pretty slow on it. I've got a few other fics I'm currently helping out with, and I'm graduating in a month with my Associates of Science in Nursing. So, I won't turn a friend away, but it may be a while depending on the level of work required.

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About me... (WIP)


Mane 6: Rarity

CMC: Sweetie Belle

Princess: Princess Luna

Villain: Sombra